机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 注意句子结构和语法错误，避免重复和口头语（例如“umm”、“so”过多）。回答要更直接，首句点明观点，随后用一到两句具体理由或例子支持。将动词时态和搭配修正（例如“need to wash my clothes”而不是“need to umm, washing my clothes”）。

示例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine. I use it almost every day because it saves me time and effort when doing laundry. For example, I can set a program in the evening and have clean clothes ready the next morning, which is very convenient.

建议: 减少非正式口语和语法错误，注意主谓一致和用词（应为“sweeping machines”或“vacuum cleaners”）。回答要有逻辑，先给观点，再用一两条具体理由支持，并使用连词连接句子。避免不清晰的表达如“lying on washing machine”。

示例: Yes, I think both washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important. They help people save time and keep the home clean with less effort. For instance, after a long day at work I can quickly clean the floor with a vacuum cleaner and do laundry simultaneously.

建议: 回答要更清晰并用完整句子说明偏好，避免中断和重复。可以解释为什么更喜欢问专业人员（比如安全、避免损坏），并用连词使句子流畅。

示例: Usually I don't read the manual; instead, I ask a professional or someone experienced for help. I find that asking saves time and ensures I use the machine safely and correctly.

建议: 表达基本正确，但要注意用词和句型多样性，避免重复“how to use”。可先给明确观点，然后用一到两条具体原因支持（如安全、延长设备寿命），并用连词连接。

示例: Yes, I believe reading the instructions is important because it helps you use the machine safely and avoid damaging it. For example, following the manufacturer's guidelines can prevent misuse and extend the appliance's lifespan.

× I must to use the washing machine.

✓ I must use the washing machine.

句子中 must 為情態動詞，情態動詞後面應直接接動詞原形而不是不定式 to + 動詞。因此將 "must to use" 更正為 "must use"。建議記住情態動詞（must, can, should 等）後面不加 to。

× Washing machine and sweeping machine is very important especially for me

✓ Washing machines and sweeping machines are very important, especially for me.

此處談論的是泛指多種機器，應使用複數形式並使動詞與複數主語一致（are）。原句使用單數且動詞 is 與主語數不一致。建議：談論類別或多個項目時用複數，並確保主謂一致。

× Washing machine and sweeping machine is very important especially for me because you know, I'm a lazy person, so when I was very tired, I so I really lying on washing machine and sweep machine and make it is convenient and comfortable.

✓ Washing machines and sweeping machines are very important to me because, when I'm very tired, I can really rely on them and they make things convenient and comfortable.

原句存在多處主謂不一致與動詞形式錯誤：主語應為複數（washing machines and sweeping machines），動詞應為 are。此外 "I was" 時態不合語境，應為一般現在 I’m 或 when I am very tired；"lying on" 用法錯誤，應為 rely on（依靠）；"make it is convenient" 應改為 they make things convenient。建議注意時態一致性（描述習慣用現在時）、主謂一致以及常用動詞搭配。

× I need to umm, washing my clothes every day

✓ I need to, um, wash my clothes every day

need to 後面應接動詞原形（to wash），而原句用的是動名詞 washing，且逗點位置與停頓詞有關，需改為 'wash'。建議記住 need to 後接不定式；若要表習慣性動作也使用一般現在時或不定式結構。

× I prefer to. Ask the professional person before I use a machine because that is very convenient and quick.

✓ I prefer to ask a professional before I use a machine because it is very convenient and quick.

原句中有錯誤的句子斷開（to. Ask）與代詞使用問題：使用 'the professional person' 不自然，改為 'a professional'，且指示代詞 'that' 指代不明，改為 'it' 指代閱讀/詢問的行為或服務。建議保持句子連貫，使用更自然的名詞和代詞。

× No, actually, umm, I prefer to. Ask the professional person before I use a machine because that is very convenient and quick. Umm, that is very useful and easy to understand.

✓ No, actually, I prefer to ask a professional before I use a machine because it is very convenient and quick. It is also very useful and easy to understand.

原句斷句不當且重複表述造成結構混亂。將斷開的片段合併，修正代詞以保持連貫，並合併重複意思使語意清晰。建議說話時避免不必要的停頓或句子碎片，確保句子完整。

× That is help you understand how to use and how to use nicely and easily.

✓ That helps you understand how to use it properly and easily.

原句中主語 'That' 與動詞搭配應為第三人稱單數形式 helps（屬於第三人稱單數問題也可歸入主謂一致），且 'how to use nicely' 不自然，應為 'how to use it properly' 或 'how to use it correctly'。建議注意第三人稱單數動詞結尾 -s 以及常用副詞搭配（properly, easily）。

× So that is very necessary to read the instruction before you.

✓ So it is very necessary to read the instructions before you use the machine.

原句結尾 'before you' 不完整，應說明在你做什麼之前（before you use the machine）。同時 'instruction' 應為複數 'instructions'（通常以複數指說明書的多條指示）。建議補全句子信息並使用正確的介詞短語結構。

× ...so I must to use the washing machine.

✓ ...so I must use the washing machine.

除了情態動詞用法問題外，原句中 'the washing machine' 若指家中具體一台可以用 the，但前面已提到 'in my home'，用法可接受。這裡重點是去掉不必要的 to。建議注意情態動詞後不加 to。