记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, say 'I am good at memorising things' and provide specific examples to support your answer.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For instance, I can easily remember important dates and events, although sometimes I forget minor details.

建议: Use past tense correctly and structure your sentences clearly. Explain the situation with specific details and use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, once my mother asked me to do some work at home, but I forgot it, which was very challenging for me.

建议: Focus on clarity and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples of what you need to remember daily.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, especially the tasks my mother gives me. Sometimes, I forget these tasks, which makes it challenging because I have to complete them later under pressure.

建议: Use correct grammar and sentence structure. Explain your method clearly and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: I remember important things by writing them down. For example, when my mother gives me tasks, I write them in a notebook because I tend to forget easily. This method helps me complete my work on time.

× Yes, I am good at memorize things.

✓ Yes, I am good at memorising things.

The phrase 'good at' should be followed by a verb in the '-ing' form, not the base form. Hence, 'memorize' should be 'memorising'. This is a common rule in English grammar where certain verbs or expressions are followed by gerunds.

× There are lots of movement that I am uh, fully memory, but sometimes I don't memorize lots of thing.

✓ There are lots of movements that I fully remember, but sometimes I don't memorize lots of things.

'Movement' and 'thing' should be plural ('movements', 'things') because 'lots of' indicates plural nouns. Also, 'fully memory' is incorrect; the verb 'remember' should be used instead of the noun 'memory'.

× my mother doing me a work

✓ my mother is giving me work

The verb 'doing' is incorrectly used here. The correct form is 'is giving' to indicate the present continuous tense. Also, 'a work' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.

× I am forget this work

✓ I forget this work

The verb 'forget' is incorrectly used with 'am'. The correct simple present tense is 'I forget'. 'Am forget' is not grammatically correct.

× There are lots of thing that I need to remember in my daily life

✓ There are lots of things that I need to remember in my daily life

'Thing' should be plural 'things' because 'lots of' requires a plural noun.

× It is a challenging for me

✓ It is challenging for me

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'challenging' which is an adjective here. 'Challenging' does not need an article.

× It was a quite challenging for me because I had to finish it later under pressure.

✓ It was quite challenging for me because I had to finish it later under pressure.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'quite challenging'. 'Quite challenging' is an adjective phrase and does not require an article.

× I am written these things

✓ I have written these things

The present perfect tense requires 'have' + past participle. 'Am written' is incorrect; it should be 'have written'.

× I am not memorizing such things and I forgot easily.

✓ I do not memorize such things and I forget easily.

The present continuous 'am not memorizing' is incorrect here; simple present 'do not memorize' is appropriate for habitual actions. Also, 'forgot' should be 'forget' to maintain present tense.

× So it is a quite challenging for me that I forgot things but later I return this work.

✓ So it is quite challenging for me that I forget things but later I return this work.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'Forgot' should be 'forget' to match the present tense context. Also, 'a quite challenging' is incorrect; 'quite challenging' is correct.