记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用完整句子表达观点。

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I find it hard to remember large amounts of information quickly.

建议: 回答内容不够清晰，语句断断续续，缺少连贯性。建议用完整句子描述事件，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I once forgot about 500 dollars on my desk, and when I came back, it was gone.

建议: 回答较为清晰，但句子结构简单且有语法错误。建议使用连词连接句子，丰富细节，使表达更自然。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember the time to have lunch and also to limit the time I spend on my mobile phone because I often waste too much time on social media.

建议: 表达不完整且有语法错误，缺少具体细节。建议用完整句子说明方法，并举例说明。

示例: I usually write notes and set alarms on my phone to remind me of important tasks. For example, I set an alarm to remind me of meetings.

× I'm not those types of person.

✓ I'm not that type of person.

这里的主语是单数形式"I"，所以后面的"person"也应该是单数，且"those types"是复数，和单数不匹配。应使用单数形式"that type"。

× Who can memorize all the syllabus of attacks and? Copy them directly.

✓ Who can memorize the entire syllabus of attacks and copy it directly?

句子结构不完整且断裂，缺少连贯性。"syllabus"是单数，后面应接单数代词"it"，并且两个动作应连贯表达。

× So therefore I'm. Always. Getting a lower grade in.

✓ So therefore, I'm always getting lower grades.

句子断裂且不完整，缺少宾语。"grade"应使用复数形式"grades"，并且句子应连贯表达。

× There are so many numerous events,

✓ There are so many events,

"many"和"numerous"意思重复，不能同时使用，应选择其中一个。

× but the most impressive is that I forgot about five, $500 on my. Desk and when I? Back to sea. It disappeared.

✓ but the most impressive is that I forgot about five hundred dollars on my desk, and when I came back to see, it had disappeared.

句子断裂且时态错误。"when I? Back to sea"应为"when I came back to see"，且"disappeared"应使用过去完成时"had disappeared"表示先发生的动作。

× when I? Back to sea.

✓ when I came back to see.

"Back to sea"用词错误，应为"came back to see"表示回来查看。

× I forgot about five, $500 on my. Desk

✓ I forgot about five hundred dollars on my desk

数字和货币单位表达不规范，应写作"five hundred dollars"。

× the time for me spend on mobile phone

✓ the time I spend on my mobile phone

"for me spend"结构错误，应为"I spend"，且"mobile phone"前应加物主代词"my"。

× the time for me to have a lunch

✓ the time for me to have lunch

"lunch"是不可数名词，前面不加冠词"a"。

× set some arm to remind me.

✓ set some alarm to remind me.

"arm"拼写错误，应为"alarm"，表示闹钟。

× For time that I am required to do something.

✓ For the time that I am required to do something.

缺少冠词"the"，使句子完整。

× For example, I. Drop down.

✓ For example, I write down notes.

句子不完整且表达不清，"drop down"用法错误，应为"write down notes"表示记笔记。