记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I'm not very good at memories since”不符合英语习惯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且注意句子结构的完整性。此外，回答中可以适当使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I learn new vocabulary, I often forget the words quickly. Therefore, I have to review and repeat them frequently to remember them better.

建议: 回答中存在语法不完整和表达不清的问题，如“last system”和“Which was quite stressful because it.”句子不完整。建议使用完整的句子，并且补充具体细节，使表达更清晰和连贯。

示例: Of course, I have forgotten something important before. For example, last semester, I forgot to submit a teamwork homework, which was quite stressful because it affected my grade.

建议: 回答中缺少连贯性，句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子，并用连接词连接各个事项，使表达更自然流畅。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to finish my homework, feed my cats, and tidy my room.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“It's can.”不正确。建议使用完整且连贯的句子，并适当使用连接词，使表达更清晰。

示例: I write down important things to remember them. I have a notebook where I always write important tasks, and it helps remind me to do them.

× Actually, I'm not very good at memories since.

✓ Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things.

这里应使用动名词形式'memorising'，而不是名词'memories'。动名词用来表示动作或能力，符合句意。

× For example, when I learned new vocabulary, I often forget the words quickly.

✓ For example, when I learn new vocabulary, I often forget the words quickly.

句中描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时，'learn'而非过去时'learned'。

× So I have to review and repeat them frequently and to remember them better.

✓ So I have to review and repeat them frequently to remember them better.

不定式'to remember'前不应有连词'and'，否则句子结构不正确。应直接连接不定式短语。

× Of course, I have forgotten something important before.

✓ Of course, I have forgotten something important before.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× For example, last system.

✓ For example, last semester.

'system'应为'semester'，且句子不完整，应补充完整表达。

× I forgot to submit a teamwork homework.

✓ I forgot to submit a team homework assignment.

'teamwork homework'表达不自然，改为'team homework assignment'更合适。

× Which was quite stressful because it.

✓ This was quite stressful because of it.

句子不完整，需用完整句表达原因。

× I need to remember finish my homework, Feed my cats. And tidying my room.

✓ I need to remember to finish my homework, feed my cats, and tidy my room.

动词不定式应使用'to finish'，'feed'应小写，'tidying'应改为动词原形'tidy'，并用逗号连接。

× I will write down to remember important things.

✓ I will write down important things to remember.

'to remember important things'应放在句尾，修饰前面的动作。

× I have a notebook.

✓ I have a notebook.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× I always write the important things on it.

✓ I always write important things in it.

'write on it'通常指写在物体表面，写笔记本应用'in it'。

× It's can.

✓ It can.

'It's'是'it is'的缩写，后面不应直接跟情态动词'can'。

× Reminds me to do them.

✓ It reminds me to do them.

缺少主语'It'，句子不完整。