记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，且有语法错误。建议直接回答问题，避免无关内容，并使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising, especially complex theories or mathematical formulas, because they require a lot of concentration.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地说明情况，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I rarely forget important things because I always keep notes on my phone about urgent events, which helps me remember them.

建议: 回答中断句不完整，表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my work schedule during the day when I have an internship, and appointments with my friends after work.

建议: 回答中出现语法错误和不完整的句子，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，避免错误，并清楚说明记忆方法。

示例: I usually keep notes on my phone about urgent events or appointments. Sometimes, I also put sticky notes on my desk to remind myself of important tasks.

× Some complex theories or mathematics works.

✓ Some complex theories or mathematics work.

这里的'mathematics'是不可数名词，不能用复数形式'works'，应使用单数形式'work'。数学作为学科名词通常视为单数。

× I have a good habit of keeping notes about about the urgency at all important events on my phone.

✓ I have a good habit of keeping notes about the urgency of all important events on my phone.

句中重复使用了'about'，且'urgency at all important events'表达不准确，应改为'urgency of all important events'，使表达更自然准确。

× On my phone, so that they can always allow me.

✓ I keep them on my phone so that they can always remind me.

原句结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，且'allow me'用词不当，应改为'remind me'，使句子完整且语义明确。

× During the daytime, I have to remember the. Work schedule when I have intern work and after work I have to remember the appointment with my friends.

✓ During the daytime, I have to remember the work schedule when I have intern work, and after work, I have to remember the appointment with my friends.

句中断句错误，'the.'后不应换行，应连贯成一句，且在'work'前加逗号，保持句子流畅。

× Sometimes when I have to study in front of the desk, I usually stick the nose on my surface of the desk to.

✓ Sometimes when I have to study in front of the desk, I usually stick the notes on the surface of the desk too.

'nose'应为'notes'，表示笔记；'my surface'应为'the surface'，且句尾'to'应为'too'，表示也。

× Sometimes when I have to study in front of the desk, I usually stick the nose on my surface of the desk to.

✓ Sometimes when I have to study in front of the desk, I usually stick the notes on the surface of the desk too.

'stick the notes on the surface'中介词'on'使用正确，但'my surface'应改为'the surface'，因为桌面是特指的物体，使用定冠词。