记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to avoid redundancy and structure your response with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words. Also, pay attention to grammar, such as article usage and verb forms.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because it helps me maintain my daily routine and healthy eating habits. For instance, remembering my meal plans ensures I stay fit and energetic throughout the day.

建议: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas and by providing more specific examples. Also, correct verb tenses and plural forms will make your answer more natural.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things, especially when I am excited. For example, I once missed a deadline and forgot to bring important documents because I was too distracted.

建议: Your answer is informative but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'which helps' correctly, and ensure subject-verb agreement. Try to be concise and clear.

示例: I need to remember my daily routine, which I have followed for the past two years because it helps me maintain a healthy and balanced lifestyle. For example, I keep track of what to eat and avoid, which ensures I stay fit and energetic throughout the day.

建议: Your answer is somewhat confusing due to grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, and use correct verb tenses and articles. Avoid repeating the same idea unnecessarily.

示例: I usually use a reminder app on my iPhone to remember important things. This app has been very helpful in managing my daily routine for the past two years.

× I'm a very good at memorizing things because it's very helpful for me to maintain my routine and maintain my good meal.

✓ I'm very good at memorizing things because it's very helpful for me to maintain my routine and maintain my good meal.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'very good'. 'Very good' is an adjective phrase and does not require an article before it. Removing 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Also because I never forgot anything because my memorizing things is very good for my healthy life routine.

✓ Also, I have never forgotten anything because my memorizing is very good for my healthy life routine.

The phrase 'never forgot' should be in present perfect tense 'have never forgotten' to indicate an experience up to now. Also, 'my memorizing things' is awkward; 'my memorizing' is better.

× When I'm excited I forgot each and every important thing.

✓ When I'm excited, I forget each and every important thing.

The sentence talks about a habitual action, so present tense 'forget' is appropriate instead of past tense 'forgot'. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause.

× For example, deadline, important documents, address, timeline.

✓ For example, deadlines, important documents, addresses, timelines.

The list items should be plural to match the context of multiple examples. Also, the sentence is a fragment; it should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased.

× I forgot everything when I'm excited for anything.

✓ I forget everything when I'm excited about anything.

The verb 'forgot' should be present tense 'forget' to indicate habitual action. Also, the preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'about' is the correct preposition after 'excited'.

× I need to remember my daily routine which I have been following for the last two years because it's helped me to maintain my healthy and balanced lifestyle.

✓ I need to remember my daily routine which I have been following for the last two years because it has helped me to maintain my healthy and balanced lifestyle.

The phrase 'it's helped' should be 'it has helped' to correctly use present perfect tense referring to an action continuing up to now.

× For example, I keep track of what to eat and what to avoid, which is ensure that I stay fit and energetic, thought out the day.

✓ For example, I keep track of what to eat and what to avoid, which ensures that I stay fit and energetic throughout the day.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to the previous clause and should be followed by 'ensures' (third person singular verb). Also, 'thought out' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'throughout'.

× This routine has been very beneficial and managing.

✓ This routine has been very beneficial in managing my health.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'in managing my health' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I usually do when I if I want to remember important thing I used a reminder app which is in iPhone and it is very helpful app because I remember each and everything through that app and it's maintained my life and maintain my whole routine since from last two years.

✓ I usually use a reminder app on my iPhone when I want to remember important things. It is a very helpful app because I remember everything through it, and it has helped me maintain my life and routine for the last two years.

The original sentence is a run-on with incorrect verb tenses and structure. 'I usually do when I if' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually use'. 'Used' is past tense; present tense 'use' fits better. 'Important thing' should be plural 'important things'. 'Which is in iPhone' is awkward; 'on my iPhone' is correct. 'It's maintained' should be 'it has helped me maintain' for clarity and correct tense. Also, 'since from last two years' is incorrect; 'for the last two years' is correct.