记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, keep your answer concise and coherent.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things such as my schedules and important dates. I often connect special moments with people I care about, which helps me remember them better and organize my timetable effectively.

建议: Your answer is confusing and repetitive. Provide a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific details using linking words. Also, correct grammar and avoid redundancy.

示例: I rarely forget important things, but once I forgot to submit my homework during class. Since then, I have been very careful to complete and submit my assignments on time.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words to make your response coherent.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my plans, daily routines, and work meetings. Additionally, I make sure to allocate time to spend with my family, which is very important to me.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. Use correct grammar and avoid redundancy.

示例: I usually use my mobile phone to take notes and set schedules for important dates and routines. Also, I set alarms to wake up early, which helps me stay organized throughout the day.

× Yes, I am glad to myself that I am better to memorizing things like my schedules, my plans, my loved ones, something special times that helps me to connect it with them so closely and it helps to make my timetable.

✓ Yes, I am glad to myself that I am better at memorizing things like my schedules, my plans, my loved ones, and special times that help me connect with them closely and help me make my timetable.

The phrase 'better to memorizing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'better at memorizing' because 'better at' is followed by a gerund (-ing form). Also, 'something special times' is unclear and should be 'special times'. The verb 'helps' should agree with the plural subject 'times', so it changes to 'help'. Additionally, 'connect it with them' is incorrect; it should be 'connect with them'. Lastly, 'helps to make my timetable' is better as 'help me make my timetable' for clarity and correctness.

× Obviously not. I can't recall that I forgot something but but when I was in class time, I forget to join my homework in that day.

✓ Obviously not. I can't recall that I forgot something, but when I was in class, I forgot to submit my homework that day.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past tense 'forgot' to match the past time reference 'when I was in class'. Also, 'join my homework' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'submit' or 'turn in' homework. 'In that day' should be 'that day' for proper time expression.

× From that day I never forget to do on my homework.

✓ From that day, I never forget to do my homework.

The phrase 'forget to do on my homework' is incorrect. The preposition 'on' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'forget to do my homework'. Also, a comma after 'From that day' improves readability.

× At one time I do my homework.

✓ I always do my homework on time.

The phrase 'At one time I do my homework' is unclear and awkward. The intended meaning is likely that the student consistently completes homework punctually. 'I always do my homework on time' is a clearer and grammatically correct expression.

× I always have to consider about my planning, my daily routine, about jobs, what type of person should I have to take meeting.

✓ I always have to consider my planning, my daily routine, my jobs, and what type of person I should meet.

The verb 'consider' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'should I have to take meeting' is incorrect; it should be 'I should meet' or 'I should have meetings with'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× I need to give my time with my family, that types of things I need to remember on my daily life.

✓ I need to spend time with my family; those are the types of things I need to remember in my daily life.

'Give my time with my family' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'spend time with my family'. 'That types of things' should be 'those types of things' to agree in number and demonstrative pronoun. Also, 'on my daily life' should be 'in my daily life'.

× I usually prefer to use my mobile phones notes and schedules that take my dates and my routine.

✓ I usually prefer to use my mobile phone's notes and schedules that keep track of my dates and my routine.

'Mobile phones notes' should be 'mobile phone's notes' to show possession. The phrase 'that take my dates and my routine' is unclear; 'keep track of my dates and my routine' is more appropriate. Also, 'prefer to use' is acceptable but 'prefer using' could also be used.

× It Remember Me and I also put alarm to wake up early in the morning.

✓ It reminds me, and I also set an alarm to wake up early in the morning.

'It Remember Me' is incorrect; the verb should be 'reminds' with the subject 'It' and object 'me'. 'Put alarm' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'set an alarm'. The sentence is corrected for proper subject-verb agreement and idiomatic expression.

× It said by all time routine and planning in mobile.

✓ It is used for all my routine and planning on my mobile.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'It said by all time routine and planning in mobile' does not make sense. The intended meaning is likely that the mobile is used for routine and planning. The corrected sentence clarifies this meaning with proper structure.