记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，句子结构混乱，且内容重复。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达原因。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I have many tasks every day, so it's easy for me to forget some things.

建议: 回答中表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，且细节不够具体。建议用更准确的时态和词汇，详细说明忘记的重要事情及其后果。

示例: Yes, I once forgot an important notice about getting a vaccine at my university, which caused me to delay the vaccination and spend extra time catching up.

建议: 回答不完整且句子结构混乱，缺少具体细节和连贯的表达。建议明确列举需要记住的具体事项，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember various things, such as deadlines for my assignments and important appointments.

建议: 回答表达不够自然，语法错误影响理解。建议使用更自然的表达方式，清晰说明记忆方法并使用连接词。

示例: Usually, I rely on my memory, but for things that are easy to forget, I write them down on a piece of paper and keep it in my pocket to remind myself.

× because there is too much things on my daily task.

✓ because there are too many things on my daily tasks.

这里的主语是复数things，应该用复数形式的动词are，且much用于不可数名词，things是可数名词，应使用many；task应为复数tasks，因为有多个任务。

× So there is hard, it is hard to avoid something that is easy to forgotten.

✓ So it is hard to avoid something that is easy to forget.

句子结构不完整，there is hard不符合英语表达，应改为it is hard；forgotten是过去分词，句中应使用动词原形forget。

× Yes, sometimes I will forget something in my campus life, especially some important notice, for example, the notice to take the vaccine.

✓ Yes, sometimes I will forget something in my campus life, especially some important notices, for example, the notice to take the vaccine.

notice是可数名词，表示多个通知时应使用复数notices。

× I had a time that I forgot these things, so I had to spend a lot.

✓ There was a time when I forgot these things, so I had to spend a lot.

表达“有一次”应使用there was a time；原句中had a time用法不当。

× Well there is many things that I need to remember in my daily life and they can divide it into many types of things.

✓ Well there are many things that I need to remember in my daily life and I can divide them into many types of things.

主语things是复数，谓语动词应为are；they指代不明确，应改为I；divide的宾语应为them而非it。

× Most of the times I will remember they were my brain, but sometimes in front of things that are easy to forgot, I will write down on a paper and put it into my pocket to make sure that I always remember it.

✓ Most of the time I remember with my brain, but sometimes for things that are easy to forget, I will write them down on a paper and put it into my pocket to make sure that I always remember them.

times应为time；remember后不应接they were my brain，表达不清；forgot应为forget；write down后应有宾语them；put it into my pocket中it应指代前文内容，改为them更准确。