记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorising things”，句子结构不完整。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，使表达更流畅自然。

示例: I used to be good at memorising things, but now it's more difficult because I have a lot of information to remember. To cope with this, I usually write notes on my smartphone.

建议: 回答重复了之前的问题内容，缺乏针对“忘记重要事情”的具体回答。建议直接回答问题，举例说明曾经忘记过的重要事情，并说明原因或后果。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as missing a deadline for a project because I didn't write it down. Since then, I always use my smartphone to keep track of important dates.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“guideline time”应为“deadlines”，句子结构不完整。建议使用更准确的词汇，简洁表达需要记住的具体内容。

示例: As a university student, I need to remember assignment deadlines and prepare for the tasks I have to do the next day to avoid being late.

建议: 回答中存在重复和不完整的句子，表达不够连贯。建议简化句子，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并完整表达推荐给谁。

示例: I usually write down important tasks and their deadlines on my smartphone. I find this method very effective, and I often recommend it to my friends.

× I used to be good at memory things.

✓ I used to be good at memorising things.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorising things'表示记忆的动作。memory是名词，不能直接修饰things。

× now I think I'm more difficult to do that

✓ now I think it's more difficult to do that

'I'm more difficult'结构错误，形容词'difficult'用来描述事物，主语应为'it'，表示'这件事更难'。

× I have tons of in information to remember to cope with it.

✓ I have tons of information to remember to cope with it.

'in information'中'in'多余，应直接用'information'表示信息。

× I usually write down them on my smartphone to make me umm.

✓ I usually write them down on my smartphone to help me remember.

'write down them'顺序错误，正确用法是'write them down'，且'make me'不合适，应改为'help me remember'。

× I used to be good at memories things.

✓ I used to be good at memorising things.

'memories things'错误，'memories'是复数名词，不能修饰things，应使用动名词'memorising things'。

× I think it's more difficult for me to do that, uh, cause nowadays, nowadays, uh, I have to remember tons of information, umm, to cope with that,

✓ I think it's more difficult for me to do that because nowadays I have to remember tons of information to cope with it.

'cause'口语化且重复，且'cope with that'中'that'指代不明，改为'it'更合适。

× I usually write down the important notes on my smartphone to help me remember.

✓ I usually write down important notes on my smartphone to help me remember.

'the important notes'不需要定冠词'the'，因为泛指重要的笔记。

× I usually have to remember the important guideline time about my assignments and paper to make me sure umm don't be late to submit them.

✓ I usually have to remember the important deadlines for my assignments and papers to make sure I don't submit them late.

'guideline time'用词不当，应使用'deadlines'表示截止时间；'paper'应复数；'make me sure'错误，应为'make sure I'。

× I need to prepare and remember what I need to do in the tomorrow.

✓ I need to prepare and remember what I need to do tomorrow.

'in the tomorrow'错误，'tomorrow'作为副词不需要介词。

× I usually write down the most important things on my smartphone and take notes how to do and when the time I need to do on the smartphone.

✓ I usually write down the most important things on my smartphone and take notes on how and when I need to do them.

'take notes how to do and when the time I need to do'结构混乱，应改为'take notes on how and when I need to do them'。

× And I always recommend this way to my.

✓ And I always recommend this method to my friends.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，'to my'后应有宾语，如'my friends'。