记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating words like 'thing things' and use correct terms such as 'diary' instead of 'daddy'. Also, keep your answer concise and clear, using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Honestly, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget my daily tasks, so I set reminders on my phone and write notes in my personal diary to help me remember.

建议: Your answer has good content but needs better sentence structure and grammar. Avoid repeating words and use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to make your answer coherent. Also, try to be more concise and clear in your explanation.

示例: Last month, I forgot my best friend's birthday, which made her very upset. I felt really bad because I worry that my forgetfulness might harm our relationship in the future.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to organise your ideas clearly and complete your sentences. Use linking words to list your daily tasks and be specific about what you need to remember. Avoid unnecessary repetition and ensure your answer is complete.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to complete my assignments on time, wash clothes twice a week, and cook meals for myself. Sometimes, I forget some steps, so I try to plan my tasks carefully.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for better flow. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and use singular form 'diary' instead of 'Diaries'. Make your answer more concise and natural.

示例: To remember important things, I set reminders on my phone and write events in my personal diary. Additionally, I regularly check my notes and remind myself about upcoming tasks to avoid mistakes.

× Well, frankly speaking I'm not good at remembering thing things.

✓ Well, frankly speaking I'm not good at remembering things.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Using singular 'thing' here is incorrect as the context implies more than one item to remember.

× I usually forget my routine work also like what I have to do next.

✓ I usually forget my routine work, like what I have to do next.

The phrase 'routine work' is uncountable and does not need pluralization, but the sentence structure needed a comma for clarity. No plural issue here, but punctuation improves readability.

× So I put reminder on my phone even I write it on my personal daddy so I can avoid such kind of problems.

✓ So I put reminders on my phone and even write them in my personal diary so I can avoid such kinds of problems.

The preposition 'on' is correct for phone but 'write it on my personal daddy' is incorrect; it should be 'write them in my personal diary'. Also, 'reminder' should be plural 'reminders' to match context. 'Daddy' is a typo for 'diary'. 'Such kind of problems' should be 'such kinds of problems' or 'such kinds of problems' for plural.

× Well, I clearly remember on the last month there was my best friend's birthday I and guess what I forget her birthday and she was so upset with me that how can I forget his her birthday.

✓ Well, I clearly remember last month was my best friend's birthday and guess what, I forgot her birthday and she was so upset with me, asking how I could forget her birthday.

The phrase 'on the last month' is incorrect; it should be 'last month'. The verb 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past event. 'His her birthday' is incorrect; 'her birthday' is correct. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I feel so sad that this problem of mine of forgetting things will end up my relationship someday.

✓ I feel so sad that this problem of mine, forgetting things, will end my relationship someday.

The phrase 'end up my relationship' is incorrect; it should be 'end my relationship'. Also, the sentence is restructured for clarity. The pronoun use is corrected to match the intended meaning.

× Well, there are numerous stores that I had to remember like doing my work on time like assignments and homework and other things like washing clothes twice a week and cooking a meal for me myself making bad.

✓ Well, there are numerous things that I have to remember, like doing my work on time, such as assignments and homework, and other things like washing clothes twice a week and cooking a meal for myself, making bad habits less likely.

The word 'stores' is incorrect; it should be 'things'. 'Had to' should be 'have to' to match present tense. 'For me myself making bad' is unclear and corrected to 'for myself, making bad habits less likely' for clarity. The sentence is restructured for better meaning.

× I usually forget some kind of some of the steps because.

✓ I usually forget some of the steps because of that.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Some kind of some of the steps' is redundant and incorrect. The correction completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Well, now to tackle this problem of mine, I put reminders on my phone, uh, to avoid such mistakes.

✓ Well, now to tackle this problem of mine, I put reminders on my phone to avoid such mistakes.

The sentence is correct but removing 'uh' improves formality. No preposition error here.

× And even though I write important events on my personal Diaries so I can regular check up on them, additionally, I keep reminding myself that I have to do this certain work in this time.

✓ And even though I write important events in my personal diary so I can regularly check them, additionally, I keep reminding myself that I have to do certain work at this time.

'Diaries' should be singular 'diary' if referring to one. 'On' should be 'in' for writing in diary. 'Regular check up' should be 'regularly check'. 'This certain work in this time' should be 'certain work at this time' for correct preposition use. The sentence is restructured for clarity.