记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến câu trả lời không tự nhiên và khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và hoàn thiện câu ví dụ để làm rõ ý hơn.

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often find it difficult to remember details. For example, when I learn new vocabulary, I usually have to review it several times to remember it well.

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều từ ngữ không cần thiết như "umm" làm giảm tính tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể, rõ ràng hơn.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once forgot to attend a friend's birthday party, which made me feel really bad.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important things like my routines and schedules for work and study. For example, tomorrow I have a study session planned, so I need to prepare my materials in advance.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng câu cuối cùng "in order to let my hair down" không phù hợp với ngữ cảnh và làm câu trả lời kém tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng các cụm từ phù hợp hơn để diễn đạt ý tưởng.

示例: I remember important things by taking notes on my phone or on paper, which helps me stay organized and not forget important tasks.

× Actually, I'm not really excellent at memorizing everything because I find it hard and difficult to remember exactly things.

✓ Actually, I'm not really excellent at memorizing everything because I find it hard and difficult to remember things exactly.

The adverb 'exactly' should be placed after the object 'things' to maintain correct word order in English sentences.

× For example, when I learn new vocabulary I would like to I usually.

✓ For example, when I learn new vocabulary, I usually like to memorize it.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper structure. Adding 'I usually like to memorize it' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× I would say I have forgotten a lot of important things of Umm.

✓ I would say I have forgotten a lot of important things.

The phrase 'of Umm' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Removing it clarifies the sentence and maintains correct tense usage.

× I remembered umm, the intervention to the birthday party umm from my friend that I forgot to.

✓ I remember, umm, the invitation to the birthday party from my friend that I forgot to attend.

The sentence is unclear and incomplete. Correcting 'intervention' to 'invitation' and completing the sentence with 'attend' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I usually need to remember some important things in my life, like my daily routines, my schedule to work, to study.

✓ So I usually need to remember some important things in my life, like my daily routines and my schedule for work and study.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used with 'work' and 'study'. The correct preposition is 'for' when referring to schedules.

× For example, tomorrow I will have my study schedule, so I have to work with the.

✓ For example, tomorrow I will have my study schedule, so I have to work accordingly.

The original sentence ends abruptly and is incomplete. Adding 'accordingly' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× Well, it's an interesting question. So I I remember important things by taking notes on phones or the paper in order to let my hair down and easy to remember.

✓ Well, it's an interesting question. So I remember important things by taking notes on my phone or on paper to make it easier to remember.

The phrase 'let my hair down' is idiomatic and inappropriate here. The sentence is corrected to express the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.