记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant but contains some repetition and minor hesitations. Try to avoid repeating words and use more varied vocabulary. Also, make your sentences more concise and natural by removing filler words and correcting small errors like 'namespaces' which seems out of context. For example, you could say 'I struggle to remember names and important dates.'

示例: No, I am not very good at memorising things. I often forget names and important dates. For example, last year I forgot my friend's birthday, which made me feel quite bad, so I apologised to her afterwards.

建议: Your answer is relevant and includes a specific example, which is good. However, there are some hesitations and repeated words that affect fluency. Try to speak more smoothly and avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Also, use linking words to improve coherence, for example, 'One time, I forgot my house keys, and when I reached home late at night, I had to call a locksmith, which was very inconvenient.'

示例: Yes, it has happened several times. For instance, once I forgot my house keys, and when I reached home late at night, I had to call a locksmith, which was very inconvenient and troublesome.

建议: Your answer addresses the question well and includes reasons, but it has some hesitations and could be more concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, try to use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' smoothly to connect ideas. You can improve by saying, 'In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks, meetings, and special occasions because forgetting them can cause inconvenience and disappointment.'

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks, meetings, and special occasions because forgetting them can cause inconvenience and disappointment.

建议: Your answer explains your method clearly and includes an example, which is good. However, there are some grammatical errors and repetitions like 'because because'. Try to use complete sentences and avoid repeating words. Also, finish your example fully for clarity. For instance, you could say, 'I usually remember important things by writing them down on my phone and setting alarms. This method is very effective because it helps me remember meetings and special occasions. For example, I always set a reminder a day before a birthday so I have enough time to prepare.'

示例: I usually remember important things by writing them down on my phone and setting alarms. This method is very effective because it helps me remember meetings and special occasions. For example, I always set a reminder a day before a birthday so I have enough time to prepare.

× Yes, several time it has happened, but I clearly remember an incident when I forgot my house keys and when I reached home, umm, uh, it was late night and I had, I had to call locksmith uh, which was inconvenient and troublesome.

✓ Yes, several times it has happened, but I clearly remember an incident when I forgot my house keys and when I reached home, umm, uh, it was late night and I had, I had to call a locksmith uh, which was inconvenient and troublesome.

The word 'time' should be plural 'times' because it refers to multiple occurrences. Also, 'locksmith' needs the indefinite article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun and the listener is not familiar with which locksmith is meant.

× Usually remember important things by writing them down on my phone and setting alarms and reminders which help me and to not forget the things.

✓ I usually remember important things by writing them down on my phone and setting alarms and reminders which help me not to forget the things.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' at the beginning. Also, the phrase 'help me and to not forget' is incorrect; it should be 'help me not to forget' to correctly link the verb 'help' with the infinitive verb 'to forget' without 'and'.