记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your answer concise and clear, using linking words to improve coherence.

示例: To be honest, I am not very good at memorising things because I have many tasks every day, so it's impossible for me to remember everything.

建议: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I have. For example, last week I forgot to help my mother with some important tasks, which made me feel sorry. However, I usually manage to complete important things on time.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to organise your points logically.

示例: Nowadays, I need to remember when to read English books and when to write English notes, as well as how to improve my English skills.

建议: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Try to use simple, clear sentences and organise your ideas logically with linking words.

示例: I usually write important things down and ask my mother to remind me. This method helps me remember tasks effectively.

× And to be honest I am not good at memories things because I every day I have a lot of things to do and I can't memory everything's in and I think it is impossible for me to remember every.

✓ And to be honest I am not good at memorising things because every day I have a lot of things to do and I can't remember everything and I think it is impossible for me to remember everything.

The word 'memories' is a noun but the correct form here is the verb 'memorising' to describe the action. 'Memory' is a noun and cannot be used as a verb. Also, 'memory everything's in' is incorrect; the verb 'remember' should be used. 'Every' should be 'everything' to refer to all things. The sentence also had some word order issues corrected for clarity.

× Yes I have. Last week I forgot to work with my mother to do some important things. I'm so sorry for my mom and the I often forget something important but I can do it on time.

✓ Yes I have. Last week I forgot to work with my mother to do some important things. I'm so sorry for my mom and I often forget something important but I can do it on time.

The phrase 'and the I often forget' contains an unnecessary word 'the' which is incorrect. Removing 'the' corrects the sentence. The rest of the sentence is in the correct tense.

× To be honest, nowadays I need to remember what time to do to read the English book and what time to to write English notes and how to improve my English languages.

✓ To be honest, nowadays I need to remember what time to read the English book, what time to write English notes, and how to improve my English language.

The phrase 'what time to do to read' is incorrect; 'to do to' is unnecessary and should be removed. Also, 'English languages' should be singular 'English language' as it refers to the subject in general. Commas are added for clarity.

× I think I often write them down and ask my mother for help they He can help me remember that things and notice me to do and he can always.

✓ I think I often write them down and ask my mother for help. She can help me remember those things and remind me to do them, and she always can.

The pronouns 'they He' are incorrect and confusing. 'Mother' is singular and female, so 'she' should be used. 'That things' should be 'those things' to correctly refer to plural objects. 'Notice me to do' is incorrect; 'remind me to do' is the correct phrase. The sentence is split for clarity.