记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如"I'm really suck at remember things"应为"I'm really bad at remembering things"。建议注意动词形式和搭配，避免口语中过多的犹豫词（如"uh"）。回答可以更自然简洁，直接表达观点并补充细节。

示例: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things. I usually have to write down important tasks on my phone or on paper to make sure I don't forget them.

建议: 回答中有重复和犹豫词，影响流畅度。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，如"because"或"so"。补充具体的补偿方式会使内容更丰富。

示例: Definitely, yes. Last month, I was preparing the opening report for my graduation essay, which made me quite stressed, so I forgot my friend's birthday. I felt very sorry and later I bought her a gift to make up for it.

建议: 回答内容较丰富，但句子结构不够紧凑，存在语法错误（如"attend a lot of class"应为"attend a lot of classes"）。建议使用连接词如"for example"或"such as"来组织细节，使表达更自然。

示例: I need to remember many things daily. For example, as a senior university student, I attend many classes and participate in clubs such as English and science. Besides, I have to complete my homework, so my schedule is quite busy.

建议: 回答中有明显的语法和表达错误，且重复和犹豫词较多，影响理解。建议简洁明了地表达方法，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

示例: I usually write down important things in my phone or memo app. This helps remind me and prevents me from forgetting important tasks.

× Uh, actually I'm really suck at remember things.

✓ Uh, actually I'm really suck at remembering things.

动词suck后面应该接动名词形式remembering，而不是动词原形remember。动词+ing形式用来表示习惯或能力。

× I have to record it.

✓ I have to record it.

此句无语法错误，符合语法规则。

× I have to record all the things I have to finish, uh, on my phone or write down on the paper.

✓ I have to record all the things I have to finish, uh, on my phone or write them down on paper.

write down后面需要宾语，且应使用复数them指代前文的things，且on the paper中the不必要，改为on paper更自然。

× You know, last month I was preparing, uh, my opening report of my graduation essay, which made me feel quite stressed.

✓ You know, last month I was preparing, uh, my opening report for my graduation essay, which made me feel quite stressed.

preparing后面搭配介词for更合适，表示为毕业论文准备开题报告。

× So I, uh, I forgot my friend's birthday.

✓ So I, uh, forgot my friend's birthday.

句中重复使用I不必要，去掉重复的I使句子更简洁。

× I need to remember a lot of things in my daily life.

✓ I need to remember a lot of things in my daily life.

此句无语法错误，符合语法规则。

× I have to attend a lot of class, and I also join, uh, some clubs like English, science and so on.

✓ I have to attend a lot of classes, and I also join, uh, some clubs like English, science and so on.

class应使用复数classes，因为表示多个课程。

× And I have to write my homework that's really quite busy.

✓ And I have to write my homework; that's really quite busy.

原句缺少连接符号，改为分号使句子结构更清晰。

× I make make it a road to write down important things in my memo or my phone.

✓ I make it a rule to write down important things in my memo or on my phone.

原句中'make make it a road'是错误表达，应为'make it a rule'表示“养成写下重要事情的习惯”。

× Uh, it will, which can remind me and prevent me from forgetting important things and umm, and I will also remember important things, uh, through right, right, right.

✓ Uh, it can remind me and prevent me from forgetting important things, and umm, I will also remember important things by writing them down.

原句中'it will, which can'结构混乱，且'remember important things through right'表达不清，改为'by writing them down'更准确。