记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 불필요한 단어를 제거하며, 정확한 어휘를 사용해야 합니다.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I studied under the Korean education system, which required me to remember a lot of information for exams.

建议: 문법 오류가 많고, 문장이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 경험을 구체적으로 설명하며, 문장을 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday. I felt very embarrassed and apologized to him to make up for it.

建议: 문장이 명확하지 않고 어휘 사용이 부적절합니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 구체적인 예시를 들어 설명하며, 문장을 간결하고 정확하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember deadlines for assignments and the dates of meetings with my colleagues.

建议: 문법과 어휘 사용에 오류가 있으며, 문장이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 문장을 명확하고 간결하게 만들고, 적절한 연결어를 사용하여 답변을 개선해야 합니다.

示例: I remember important things by using a calendar app. I usually record my schedule there and set notifications to remind me of important events.

× I'm illegally calling some things because I took a Korean education system.

✓ I'm illegally recalling some things because I took a Korean education system.

The verb 'calling' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'recalling' to express remembering. 'Illegally' is likely a misused adverb and should be replaced with a more appropriate one or removed.

× I took a Korean education system.

✓ I went through the Korean education system.

The phrase 'a Korean education system' is incorrect because 'education system' is a specific concept; 'the' should be used instead of 'a'. Also, 'took' is not the correct verb for experiencing an education system.

× I have to take a exam, which require me to remain a lot of things so I can improve my liquor skills.

✓ I have to take an exam, which requires me to remember a lot of things so I can improve my language skills.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound. 'Require' should be 'requires' to agree with singular 'exam'. 'Remain' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'remember'. 'Liquor skills' is a mishearing or typo; likely intended 'language skills'.

× Have I forgot my best friend's birthday someday?

✓ Have I forgotten my best friend's birthday someday?

The past participle of 'forget' is 'forgotten', not 'forgot', when used with 'have'. Also, 'someday' is not appropriate here; 'ever' or 'before' would be better.

× So at the time I was buried difficult.

✓ So at that time, I was very distressed.

'Buried difficult' is incorrect; likely a mistranslation or misuse. 'Distressed' or 'having difficulty' would be appropriate. Also, 'at the time' should be 'at that time'.

× I felt very embarrassed and I apologize to him not to make it up.

✓ I felt very embarrassed and I apologized to him to make it up.

The verb tenses should be consistent in past tense. 'Apologize' should be 'apologized'. The phrase 'not to make it up' is incorrect; it should be 'to make it up'.

× I have to remember things related with my tasks.

✓ I have to remember things related to my tasks.

The correct preposition after 'related' is 'to', not 'with'.

× I have to remember the assignment duration that I have to submit until that days and I have to remember the days of meetings that they that with my.

✓ I have to remember the assignment deadlines that I have to meet by those days, and I have to remember the days of meetings that I have with them.

'Duration' is incorrect; 'deadlines' or 'due dates' is better. 'That I have to submit until that days' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'that I have to meet by those days'. 'They that with my' is incorrect; corrected to 'I have with them'.

× I remember important things by using the application.

✓ I remember important things by using an application.

'The application' is too specific; 'an application' is more appropriate unless a specific app is named.

× I require that apps to not to give me the notification about the important things.

✓ I set those apps to not give me notifications about important things.

'Require' is incorrect here; 'set' or 'use' is better. 'That apps' should be 'those apps'. 'To not to give me the notification' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'to not give me notifications'.