记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memories things”应为“memorising things”，句子结构不完整。建议加强语法基础，避免重复和冗余，回答时尽量简洁明了。

示例: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising things, especially academic knowledge. For example, when I was in primary school, my teacher asked us to memorise poems, but I often forgot them quickly.

建议: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，如“remember”应为“remembered”，“remind”应为“reminded”。建议注意时态一致性，句子表达要完整且逻辑清晰。

示例: Yes, I once forgot my mother's birthday last year. Fortunately, my father reminded me a week later, and I apologized to my mother.

建议: 回答中充满了填充词“uh”，影响流畅度，且句子结构混乱，表达不清。建议减少口头语，理清句子结构，使用连词使表达更连贯。

示例: In my daily life, I usually write a To-Do List every morning. This helps me remember tasks like organizing meetings and discussing work with my colleagues.

建议: 回答不完整且语法错误明显，如“help”应为“helps”，“give a filter the”表达不清。建议练习完整表达，注意主谓一致，避免句子残缺。

示例: I prefer to write down important things in my notebook with a pen. This method helps me organize my tasks clearly and remember them better.

× I'm not very good at memories things, especially for the academic knowledge.

✓ I'm not very good at memorising things, especially academic knowledge.

这里'memories things'中的'memories'是名词复数形式，但应使用动名词'memorising'来表示记忆的动作，且'the academic knowledge'中'the'不必要，且'knowledge'是不可数名词，不能用复数形式。

× I remembered when I was a primary student my teacher asked us to memorize the poems, but the finally I can't read it and remember.

✓ I remember when I was a primary student my teacher asked us to memorize poems, but finally I couldn't read or remember them.

这里'memorized'应为一般过去时'remember'，因为是现在回忆过去的事情；'the finally'应为副词'finally'；'can't'应为过去时'couldn't'；'it'应改为复数'them'，因为指代'poems'。

× I remember the last year I forgot my mother's birthday and it's a pity after a week later my father remind me about the big event and I say sorry to my mother.

✓ I remember last year I forgot my mother's birthday and it was a pity. After a week, my father reminded me about the big event and I said sorry to my mother.

'the last year'应为'last year'；'it's a pity'应为过去时'it was a pity'；'remind'应为过去时'reminded'；'say'应为过去时'said'。

× I have a good habit to write down, uh, the To Do List, uh, in the morning, uh, and uh, to write down all the things that I need to remember, including organize the meeting and discuss the things with the colleague even to deal with.

✓ I have a good habit of writing down the To Do List in the morning, and writing down all the things that I need to remember, including organizing meetings, discussing things with colleagues, and even dealing with them.

'habit to write down'应为'habit of writing down'，习惯后接介词'of'和动名词；'organize the meeting'应为动名词形式'organizing meetings'；'discuss the things with the colleague'应为'discussing things with colleagues'，复数形式；'even to deal with'应为'and even dealing with them'。

× I also will give a filter the.

✓ I will also use a filter.

原句不完整且语法错误，'give a filter the'无意义，应改为'I will also use a filter'，符合语境。