记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较为自然，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化表达并避免冗余。可以直接回答问题后，简洁说明方法。

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things. Every night, I make a list of important tasks to help me remember them better.

建议: 回答不够连贯，有重复且句子不完整，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并补充具体例子。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things, especially when I feel nervous. For example, I once forgot my appointment because I was too anxious.

建议: 表达有些口语化且不够简洁，建议使用更正式的表达，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: The most important things I need to remember are my mother's requests, such as doing chores at home. However, I sometimes get distracted by my phone and forget them.

建议: 回答表达基本清晰，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，建议简化句子并注意语法准确。

示例: I usually write important things in my notebook. Writing helps me remember better than just listening.

× Absolutely yes, because every day before I go to bed I will always make a list of my important things and keep them in mind so that I can have good memory for them.

✓ Absolutely yes, because every day before I go to bed I always make a list of my important things and keep them in mind so that I can have a good memory of them.

这里不需要用将来时态“will”，因为描述的是习惯性的动作，应该用一般现在时。此外，短语“have good memory for them”不太自然，应该改为“have a good memory of them”。

× Certainly, especially when I feel nervous, I will easily forget something, something crucial for me.

✓ Certainly, especially when I feel nervous, I easily forget something, something crucial to me.

这里描述的是习惯性或经常发生的情况，不需要用将来时态“will”，用一般现在时更合适。另外，“crucial for me”应改为“crucial to me”，更符合英语习惯用法。

× And yeah, I think when I need to remember some important things.

✓ And yeah, I think about when I need to remember some important things.

原句缺少谓语动词，导致句子不完整。需要补充动词使句子完整。

× I think the most crucial things I need to remember is my mother's requirement because my mom always asked me to do some chores at home, but you know, I will fall into mobile phone and I will forget it.

✓ I think the most crucial thing I need to remember is my mother's requirement because my mom always asks me to do some chores at home, but you know, I get distracted by my mobile phone and I forget it.

主语“the most crucial things”是复数，但谓语用的是单数“is”，应保持主谓一致。这里应改为单数“thing”。另外，“my mom always asked”时态不对，应为一般现在时“asks”。“fall into mobile phone”表达不自然，改为“get distracted by my mobile phone”。

× So this is the most thing.

✓ So this is the most important thing.

“the most thing”表达不完整，缺少形容词修饰，应为“the most important thing”。

× From my personal perspective, I always write them down on my notebook because although you can listen to those important things for 100 times, you'd better write them down so you could have good memorize for them.

✓ From my personal perspective, I always write them down in my notebook because although you can listen to those important things 100 times, you'd better write them down so you can have a good memory of them.

“write them down on my notebook”中介词应为“in”，表示写在笔记本里。短语“listen to those important things for 100 times”中“for”应去掉，直接用数字。最后，“good memorize”应为“a good memory”，且“could”改为“can”更符合语境。