记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve fluency by reducing hesitations and filler words. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'I not' to 'I am not' and 'quite hard' to 'it's quite hard'.

示例: I am not very good at memorising things. For example, when I studied history, I found it quite hard to remember the exact timeline of events accurately.

建议: Avoid repetition and hesitations. Use past tense correctly ('forgot' instead of 'forgot'). Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words for coherence.

示例: Yes, I once forgot an important visa appointment. Although I had booked the appointment, I missed it and only remembered the next day, which was quite serious.

建议: Use complete sentences and correct grammar, such as 'I need to remember to bring the key'. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about why the key is important.

示例: I need to remember to bring my key every day because it unlocks my door and is also required to access the elevator.

建议: Reduce filler words and complete your sentences clearly. Use linking words to explain your method and give a specific example. Also, correct grammar such as 'pay the rents' to 'pay the rent'.

示例: I usually set reminders on my phone to remember important tasks. For instance, I set a reminder to call my agent to pay the rent on time.

× I not very good at memorizing things because, umm, I used to learn the, uh, history and I quite hard to, uh, remember the timeline, uh, exactly, uh, which thing happened in that time correctly.

✓ I am not very good at memorizing things because, umm, I used to learn history and it is quite hard to remember the timeline exactly, which events happened at that time correctly.

The original sentence lacks the verb 'am' after 'I' which is necessary for the present tense 'to be' verb. Also, 'I quite hard to remember' is incorrect; it should be 'it is quite hard to remember' to properly express difficulty. Additionally, 'the history' is better as 'history' without 'the' in this context.

× I used to, I used to forgot a thing.

✓ I used to forget something.

The phrase 'used to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the past tense. Therefore, 'used to forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'used to forget'.

× It's about, umm, the visa 'cause uh, that's a I, I, I have the booking for the visa application, but I didn't go there.

✓ It's about, umm, the visa because I had a booking for the visa application, but I didn't go there.

The phrase 'that's a I, I, I have' is unclear and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'because I had a booking' to correctly express possession and past action. Also, 'didn't go there' is correct for past tense.

× And the second day I just remember that I have a booking for that.

✓ And the next day I just remembered that I had a booking for that.

The sentence refers to a past event, so past tense verbs 'remembered' and 'had' should be used instead of present tense 'remember' and 'have'.

× I need to remember bring the key in my daily life because my door lock is uh is unlocked by the key and then the uh elevator also need to use the the key to tap on to to access so.

✓ I need to remember to bring the key in my daily life because my door lock is unlocked by the key and the elevator also needs the key to tap to access it.

The verb 'remember' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb 'bring'. Also, 'the elevator also need' should be 'the elevator also needs' to agree with singular subject. The phrase 'tap on to to access so' is awkward and corrected to 'tap to access it' for clarity.

× I will set a reminder to, umm, remind me to do something just like, uh, transfer the uh, rent, rent call to the uh agent because uh, I need to pay the rents like, uh, to, to.

✓ I will set a reminder to remind me to do something, like transferring the rent payment to the agent because I need to pay the rent.

The phrase 'transfer the rent call to the agent' is unclear and likely incorrect. It is corrected to 'transferring the rent payment to the agent' to make sense. Also, 'rents' is corrected to singular 'rent' as it usually refers to a single payment. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.