记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid irrelevant details, and use correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially when I was studying at school. For example, I could easily remember historical dates and facts, which helped me perform well in history lessons.

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and hesitant. Try to give a direct answer first, then support it with specific examples or reasons, using linking words to improve coherence.

示例: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I always make an effort to remember things that matter to me and my family. For instance, I never miss important family events or appointments.

建议: Your answer contains many hesitations and lacks clear structure. Try to organize your answer with a topic sentence followed by specific details, and reduce filler words to sound more natural.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to pray regularly and read the Holy Quran. Additionally, I try to do some exercises like reading or coloring to relax and stay healthy.

建议: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to explain your methods for remembering important things clearly, using linking words and specific examples.

示例: I usually remember important things by focusing on them when needed. Sometimes, I use reminders or notes, although I don't always keep a strict schedule.

× Yes, I think I'm good in memorizing thing when I was studying school.

✓ Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things when I was studying at school.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the general statement. Additionally, 'studying school' is incorrect; it should be 'studying at school' to indicate location.

× Yes, I think I'm good in memorizing thing when I was studying school.

✓ Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things when I was studying at school.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' because the speaker refers to memorizing multiple items, not just one.

× I have a history in Listen, so I get in this lesson.

✓ I have a history in listening, so I get this lesson.

The noun form 'listening' should be used instead of the verb 'Listen'. Also, 'get in this lesson' is awkward; 'get this lesson' or 'understand this lesson' is more appropriate.

× I have a history in Listen, so I get in this lesson.

✓ I have a history in listening, so I get this lesson.

No plural issue here, but 'history' is used awkwardly; however, it is acceptable in informal speech to mean experience.

× Actually, no, I didn't forget anything important.

✓ Actually, no, I haven't forgotten anything important.

Since the question is about experience up to now, the present perfect tense 'haven't forgotten' is more appropriate than simple past 'didn't forget'.

× I remember, uh, what, uh, the, uh, uh, what is the important thing for me or for my family?

✓ I remember what is important for me or for my family.

The sentence is fragmented and contains unnecessary fillers. The pronoun usage is acceptable but the sentence should be clearer and more concise.

× Actually I need to remember, uh, uh, in my daily life, uh, my pray, uh, also I need to remember every day, uh, to read Holy Quran and do some, uh, exercise for me, like reading or coloring.

✓ Actually, I need to remember in my daily life my prayers. Also, I need to remember every day to read the Holy Quran and do some exercises for myself, like reading or coloring.

'My pray' should be 'my prayers' (plural noun). 'Do some exercise for me' is awkward; 'do some exercises for myself' is better. 'Holy Quran' should have the definite article 'the' before it.

× Actually I need to remember, uh, uh, in my daily life, uh, my pray, uh, also I need to remember every day, uh, to read Holy Quran and do some, uh, exercise for me, like reading or coloring.

✓ Actually, I need to remember in my daily life my prayers. Also, I need to remember every day to read the Holy Quran and do some exercises for myself, like reading or coloring.

'Pray' is a verb; the noun form is 'prayers' and should be plural here. 'Exercise' should be plural 'exercises' when referring to multiple activities.

× Actually I remember important thing directly when I want uh.

✓ Actually, I remember important things directly when I want to.

'Important thing' should be plural 'important things'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; 'when I want' should be 'when I want to' (implying 'remember').

× Actually I remember important thing directly when I want uh.

✓ Actually, I remember important things directly when I want to.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match the general statement.

× Also sometime I remember uh by using uh, but not in my schedule, uh.

✓ Also, sometimes I remember by using hints, but not in my schedule.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb). 'By using uh' is unclear; likely 'by using hints' or 'reminders' is intended. 'Not in my schedule' is acceptable but could be clearer.

× So give me hint or uh, something to Remember Me.

✓ So, give me a hint or something to help me remember.

'Remember Me' is incorrect; the verb 'remember' should be followed by the object to be remembered, not the person. The phrase should be 'help me remember'. Also, 'hint' needs an article 'a'.