记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 文法と発音の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。例えば、'Yes, I am good at memorising things, so I usually do well in exams.'のように言えます。

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things, so I usually do well in exams.

建议: 発音と文法の誤りが多く、内容が不明瞭です。過去の出来事を話す際は、時制に注意し、文をつなげて話す練習をしましょう。例えば、'Yes, I once forgot an important promise I made with my friend in high school.'のように言えます。

示例: Yes, I once forgot an important promise I made with my friend in high school.

建议: 意味は伝わりますが、文法と語彙の使い方に改善が必要です。より自然な表現で、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、'I need to remember my daily plans because they help me stay organized and manage my time efficiently.'のように言えます。

示例: I need to remember my daily plans because they help me stay organized and manage my time efficiently.

建议: 文法の誤りがあり、表現が不自然です。理由を述べる際は、接続詞を使い、文を明確にしましょう。例えば、'I remember important things by making notes because it saves time and helps me study effectively.'のように言えます。

示例: I remember important things by making notes because it saves time and helps me study effectively.

× Yes, I'm good art memorize things, so I always have a great great at universe exam and.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing things, so I always do great in university exams.

The phrase 'good art memorize' is incorrect; it should be 'good at memorizing' because 'good at' is followed by a gerund (-ing form). Also, 'great great at universe exam and' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be 'do great in university exams' to express performance in exams properly.

× Yes, I heart forget the important promise where I was in high school. I forget. Our. Promise with my friend.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten an important promise I made in high school. I forgot our promise with my friend.

The phrase 'I heart forget' is incorrect; it should be 'I have forgotten' to express past experience. Also, 'where I was in high school' is awkward; 'I made in high school' is clearer. The fragmented sentences 'I forget. Our. Promise' should be combined properly. Pronouns and verb forms need correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I think I need to remember my plan for daily life. It makes me stay organized more clearly and. It's given me more efficiently slow out.

✓ I think I need to remember my daily life plans. It helps me stay more organized and allows me to manage my time more efficiently.

The phrase 'plan for daily life' is better as 'daily life plans' for natural expression. 'Makes me stay organized more clearly' is awkward; 'helps me stay more organized' is correct. 'It's given me more efficiently slow out' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'allows me to manage my time more efficiently.' Prepositions and word choices need correction for clarity and naturalness.

× I think remembering the important things is by essential in my life. This is because this makes easier to save my time and it is very useful to study.

✓ I think remembering important things is essential in my life because it makes it easier to save time and is very useful for studying.

The phrase 'is by essential' is incorrect; it should be 'is essential.' 'This makes easier to save my time' lacks a subject; 'it makes it easier to save time' is correct. 'Very useful to study' should be 'very useful for studying.' Adjective and preposition usage need correction for grammatical accuracy and clarity.