记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for naturalness.

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially numbers. For instance, I can only remember my own phone number but often struggle to recall others. This makes it quite challenging for me to remember detailed information.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Use a clear topic sentence and link your supporting details logically. Try to be more specific and avoid repetition to make your answer more effective.

示例: Yes, I often forget my phone. For example, when I'm in a room, I sometimes leave it somewhere and forget to take it with me when I leave, which is quite frustrating.

建议: Your answer is too long and repetitive. Use a clear topic sentence and organise your supporting details logically with linking words. Be specific and avoid repeating words to improve clarity and coherence.

示例: I need to remember many things in my daily life, such as my daily routine, assignments given by my teacher, and plans related to my future career. I also think about what I should do in the next few days.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Use a clear topic sentence and link your ideas smoothly. Try to be concise and use appropriate vocabulary for naturalness.

示例: I usually write important things down on paper or in my phone so that I can check them whenever I want. Since I tend to forget things easily, this method helps me remember clearly.

× No, I'm not good about memory things, especially the numbers.

✓ No, I'm not good at remembering things, especially numbers.

The phrase 'good about memory things' is incorrect. The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', and 'memory things' should be replaced with 'remembering things' for clarity and correctness.

× For example I can only remember my phone number but struggling to recall others and I find it's quite challenging to remember numbers or details it seems because.

✓ For example, I can only remember my phone number but struggle to recall others, and I find it quite challenging to remember numbers or details.

The sentence is ungrammatical and awkward. 'Struggling' should be 'struggle' to match the subject 'I'. The phrase 'it seems because' is unnecessary and confusing, so it is removed for clarity.

× Yes, I often forget my phone and when I'm in a room I will put my phone anywhere without remember to go out with with it.

✓ Yes, I often forget my phone, and when I'm in a room, I put my phone anywhere without remembering to take it when I go out.

The phrase 'without remember to go out with with it' is incorrect. The verb 'remember' should be in the gerund form 'remembering' after 'without'. Also, 'go out with with it' is redundant and awkward; 'take it when I go out' is clearer.

× It's for me it's very struggling things.

✓ For me, it's very difficult.

'Struggling' is a verb form and cannot be used as an adjective here. The correct adjective is 'difficult' to describe the situation.

× I need to remember a lot of things such as my daily routine and the the assignment teacher allocate for and something about my future career and I have to think about my future and what what I should do in next few days.

✓ I need to remember a lot of things such as my daily routine, the assignments the teacher allocates, and things about my future career. I have to think about my future and what I should do in the next few days.

The phrase 'the assignment teacher allocate for' is incorrect; it should be 'the assignments the teacher allocates'. Also, 'in next few days' needs the definite article 'the' before 'next few days'. Repetition of 'the' and 'what' is corrected.

× I will write it down on the paper or in my phone so that I can see it whenever I want and I because I'm a person that may easily to forget something so I will put it down on my phone to remember clearly.

✓ I will write it down on paper or in my phone so that I can see it whenever I want because I'm a person who may easily forget things, so I put it down on my phone to remember clearly.

'On the paper' is better as 'on paper' in general statements. 'I because' is incorrect; 'because' should connect clauses properly. 'A person that' should be 'a person who'. 'May easily to forget' is incorrect; 'may easily forget' is correct. 'Put it down on my phone' is acceptable but 'write it down' is better for clarity.