记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「I'm final year university student」は「I'm a final year university student」とすべきです。また、内容をより具体的にし、文を簡潔にまとめることが望ましいです。

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising because, as a final year university student, I need to remember a lot of information for my research and final reports.

建议: 文法的に誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「I've ever forgotten」は不自然で、「I have forgotten」や「I once forgot」が適切です。また、理由を明確にし、文を簡潔にまとめる必要があります。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, especially when I am very busy with my studies and feel tired.

建议: 文が断片的で不自然です。「finally university students」は誤りで、「final year university student」が正しいです。内容を一文でまとめ、理由を明確に述べることが必要です。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important knowledge related to agricultural science because I am a final year university student working on my reports.

建议: 文法と表現に誤りがあります。「Where I attempt to remember important things」は不自然で不要です。「helps me easy to remember」は「helps me to remember easily」が正しいです。簡潔で自然な表現に改善しましょう。

示例: I usually take notes to remember important things because it helps me to recall information more easily.

× Actually, I'm final year university student and I have to do final reports.

✓ Actually, I'm a final year university student and I have to do final reports.

The phrase 'final year university student' is singular and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Without the article, the sentence is grammatically incorrect. Adding 'a' clarifies that the speaker is one student in their final year.

× Yes, I've ever forgotten something important things because.

✓ Yes, I've forgotten some important things before.

The use of 'ever' is incorrect here; 'ever' is typically used in questions or negative sentences, not affirmative ones. Also, 'something important things' is contradictory because 'something' is singular and 'things' is plural. Replacing with 'some important things' and removing 'ever' corrects the sentence.

× I often lost my memories after I work on study.

✓ I often lose my memories after I work on my studies.

The verb 'lost' is past tense, but the adverb 'often' suggests a habitual action, which requires the present tense 'lose'. Also, 'work on study' is incorrect; it should be 'work on my studies' to indicate ongoing study activities.

× I need to remember. Some knowledge of my field, which is agricultural science.

✓ I need to remember some knowledge of my field, which is agricultural science.

The period after 'remember' is incorrect and breaks the sentence unnaturally. Removing the period and connecting the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× That this is because I'm finally university students and I have to find a report.

✓ That is because I'm a final year university student and I have to write a report.

'Finally university students' is incorrect; it should be 'a final year university student' to match singular subject. Also, 'find a report' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'write a report' when referring to creating a report.

× Where I attempt to remember important things.

✓ I try to remember important things.

The original sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. Starting with 'Where' is inappropriate here. Rewriting as 'I try to remember important things' forms a complete and correct sentence.

× I usually take notes because it helps me easy to remember.

✓ I usually take notes because it helps me easily remember.

The phrase 'helps me easy to remember' is incorrect. 'Easy' is an adjective, but an adverb is needed to modify the verb 'remember'. Changing 'easy' to 'easily' corrects the sentence.