记忆— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Are you good at memorising things?
考生
Not really because I'm bad at memorize anything around me so I usually structure with my right other things beside me so that make me really.
考官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
考生
Yeah, absolutely. I often uh forgot my important thing and for instance is 1 days ago I lost my money and that's make me really disappointed and stressful because that's really.
考官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
考生
Are there many things that I need to remember, such as my, uh, important list and my money, my phone when I hang out And that's a lot of thing that and I think I should, uh, set A to do list.
考官
How do you remember important things?
考生
Well, I usually set A to do list to plan what should I bring that day in that day and our visit method. I find it really functional and help me stay organized and importantly avoid forget.
评估
总分
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
分数: 40.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích hoặc đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Ngoài ra, tránh sử dụng các cụm từ không chính xác và cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.
示例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget details easily. To help myself, I usually keep important items close by so I don't lose them.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
分数: 50.0建议: Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và nói dài dòng không cần thiết. Nên thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, just one day ago, I lost my money, which made me feel very disappointed and stressed.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
分数: 45.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.
示例: There are many things I need to remember daily, such as my money, phone, and important tasks. Therefore, I think setting a to-do list helps me stay organized.
How do you remember important things?
分数: 55.0建议: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng câu trả lời vẫn còn một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
示例: I usually make a to-do list to plan what I need to bring each day. This method is very effective because it helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting important things.
语法
× Not really because I'm bad at memorize anything around me so I usually structure with my right other things beside me so that make me really.
✓ Not really because I'm bad at memorizing anything around me, so I usually structure with my right other things beside me so that makes me really.
The verb 'memorize' should be in the '-ing' form 'memorizing' after 'bad at' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'that'.
× Yeah, absolutely. I often uh forgot my important thing and for instance is 1 days ago I lost my money and that's make me really disappointed and stressful because that's really.
✓ Yeah, absolutely. I often forgot my important things and, for instance, 1 day ago I lost my money and that made me really disappointed and stressed because of that.
The verb 'forgot' is correct past tense, but 'important thing' should be plural 'important things' to match context. '1 days ago' should be '1 day ago' (singular). 'make' should be 'made' to match past tense. 'stressful' should be 'stressed' to describe feeling.
× Are there many things that I need to remember, such as my, uh, important list and my money, my phone when I hang out And that's a lot of thing that and I think I should, uh, set A to do list.
✓ There are many things that I need to remember, such as my important list, my money, and my phone when I hang out. And that's a lot of things, so I think I should set a to-do list.
The phrase 'Are there many things' should be 'There are many things' to correctly state existence. 'a lot of thing' should be 'a lot of things' (plural). 'set A to do list' should be 'set a to-do list' with correct article and hyphenation.
× Well, I usually set A to do list to plan what should I bring that day in that day and our visit method. I find it really functional and help me stay organized and importantly avoid forget.
✓ Well, I usually set a to-do list to plan what I should bring that day, and our visit method. I find it really functional and it helps me stay organized and importantly avoid forgetting.
The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a'. 'help me' should be 'helps me' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'avoid forget' should be 'avoid forgetting' because 'avoid' is followed by a gerund.
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