记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“vocabularies”应为“vocabulary”，且句子结构重复，缺乏连贯性。建议简化表达，使用更自然的句型，并避免重复。

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I study English, I often forget new vocabulary and have to review it many times to remember it.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，如“will forgot”应为“have forgotten”，且表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，避免口语填充词，增强逻辑性。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten some things before, but usually not important ones. When something is important, I always write it down in my notebook or set a reminder on my phone.

建议: 回答中存在人称混乱（使用了“your”而非“my”），句子结构混乱且不连贯。建议理清句子结构，使用正确的人称，并增加连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: As a student, I need to remember my studies, homework, and their deadlines. Also, sometimes teachers change class times, so I have to keep track of those changes.

建议: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“write down at the note”应为“write notes”，且“phones”应为“phone”。建议注意介词使用和单复数形式。

示例: I usually write notes on sticky notes and put them in obvious places. I also set reminders on my phone to help me remember important things.

× I think I'm not good at it because when I study English I should remember the vocabularies.

✓ I think I'm not good at it because when I study English I should remember the vocabulary.

“vocabulary”是不可数名词，表示词汇总称，不用复数形式。

× I often forget it and I have to remember it again and again.

✓ I often forget them and I have to remember them again and again.

“vocabularies”改为“vocabulary”后，代词应与复数名词对应，使用“them”而非“it”。

× I think I will forgot something, but not important because, uh, I can't remember it exactly right now but uh, when something's important, I must write it on my notebook or set a daily routine in my phones to remind me.

✓ I think I will forget something, but not important because, uh, I can't remember it exactly right now but uh, when something's important, I must write it in my notebook or set a daily routine on my phone to remind me.

“will forgot”错误，助动词“will”后应接动词原形“forget”。“write it on my notebook”应为“write it in my notebook”，因为写在笔记本里。手机应为单数“phone”，且“set a daily routine on my phone”更自然。

× I must write it on my notebook or set a daily routine in my phones to remind me.

✓ I must write it in my notebook or set a daily routine on my phone to remind me.

“write on my notebook”应为“write in my notebook”，表示写入笔记本内部。手机应为单数“phone”，且“set a daily routine on my phone”更符合习惯用法。

× Because I was a student so I need to remember the studies and your homework and the deadline of your homework and the date of your example.

✓ Because I was a student, I needed to remember the studies, my homework, the deadline of my homework, and the date of my exam.

“your homework”应改为“my homework”，保持人称一致。“date of your example”应为“date of my exam”，更符合语境。

× Because I was a student so I need to remember the studies and your homework and the deadline of your homework and the date of your example.

✓ Because I was a student, I needed to remember the studies, my homework, the deadline of my homework, and the date of my exam.

前半句使用过去时“was”，后半句应保持时态一致，使用过去时“needed”。

× Because I was a student so I need to remember the studies and your homework and the deadline of your homework and the date of your example.

✓ Because I was a student, I needed to remember the studies, my homework, the deadline of my homework, and the date of my exam.

“your homework”与说话人身份不符，应使用“my homework”。

× And sometimes teacher will change their time to have a class so I have to remember this.

✓ And sometimes teachers will change their class time, so I have to remember this.

“change their time to have a class”表达不自然，改为“change their class time”更准确。

× And sometimes teacher will change their time to have a class so I have to remember this.

✓ And sometimes teachers will change their class time, so I have to remember this.

“teacher”应为复数“teachers”，因为后面用“their”指代多个老师。

× I often write down at the note or the sticker and the stick on the obvious place or set a reminder on my phones to remind me.

✓ I often write notes or stickers and stick them in obvious places or set a reminder on my phone to remind me.

“write down at the note”不正确，应为“write notes”。“stick on the obvious place”应为“stick them in obvious places”。“phones”应为单数“phone”。