记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, pay attention to subject-verb agreement and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'memorizing', you can use synonyms or rephrase sentences.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially memorable events from my childhood which hold a special place in my mind. Additionally, I always remember the birthdays of my close friends and family, so I can wish them on time.

建议: Improve clarity by correcting word choice and grammar, such as 'knocks down' to 'jots down' and 'accent' to 'appointment'. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid awkward phrasing.

示例: Not really. I usually jot down important dates in the notes app on my phone. For instance, if I have an appointment or an important interview, I regularly review these reminders to ensure I don't forget them.

建议: Try to use more precise vocabulary and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' to organise your points better. Also, avoid repetition of similar ideas.

示例: In my daily life as a dentist, I need to remember patient appointments, their case histories, diagnoses, and treatment plans. For example, I review the day's treatment schedule each morning to ensure I provide appropriate care.

建议: Focus on correct spelling ('notting' should be 'noting') and sentence clarity. Use linking words such as 'also' and 'for instance' to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas.

示例: I remember important things by noting them down. Also, for significant events like family gatherings or interviews, I inform my mother, who reminds me at the right time, which helps me not to forget.

× And also I keeps memorizing the birthday dates of my close ones and I will always wish them correctly.

✓ And also I keep memorizing the birthday dates of my close ones and I will always wish them correctly.

The verb 'keeps' is incorrect here because the subject 'I' requires the base form 'keep' without 's' in the present tense. This is a third person singular issue where the verb form does not agree with the subject.

× I need to be aware about the appointments that I have scheduled to the patients and the case history and also I have to keep remembering the diagnosis and the treatment plan.

✓ I need to be aware of the appointments that I have scheduled for the patients and the case history and also I have to keep remembering the diagnosis and the treatment plan.

The phrase 'aware about' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'aware of'. Also, 'scheduled to the patients' should be 'scheduled for the patients' to correctly express the relationship between appointments and patients.

× So if there is an accent or if there is an important interview, I constantly review the dates to remind myself so that I will not forget things out.

✓ So if there is an event or if there is an important interview, I constantly review the dates to remind myself so that I will not forget things.

The word 'accent' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'event'. Also, the phrase 'forget things out' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'forget things'. This is an incorrect use of words and prepositions.

× I will tell my mother and she also reminds me that during that particular time.

✓ I will tell my mother and she also reminds me during that particular time.

The phrase 'reminds me that during that particular time' is incorrect because 'that' is unnecessary and causes confusion. The correct phrase is 'reminds me during that particular time' to indicate when the reminder happens.

× Yes, I do remember important things by notting them down and also if the event is really important like if there is a family event or there is an interview date, I will tell my mother and she also reminds me that during that particular time.

✓ Yes, I do remember important things by noting them down and also if the event is really important like if there is a family event or there is an interview date, I will tell my mother and she also reminds me during that particular time.

The word 'notting' is a spelling mistake; the correct word is 'noting'. This correction improves clarity and correctness in the sentence.