记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “Not really, I find memorising difficult.”), avoid hesitation sounds and repetitions, and add one or two specific strategies or an example to support your statement. Use linking words like “however” or “for example” to make your answer coherent. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

示例: Not really — I find memorising difficult and it usually takes me longer than other people. For example, when I learn new vocabulary for a test, I have to repeat words several times and use flashcards to remember them.

建议: Answer directly with a clear example and a brief consequence. Avoid vague phrases and repetition. Use linking words like “for example” or “because” to explain why it is important. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use precise vocabulary (e.g. “bank PIN” instead of repeating ‘passwords’).

示例: Yes, I often forget important things like my phone password or my bank PIN. This is a real problem because I can’t access my accounts until I reset them.

建议: Structure the answer: begin with a topic sentence listing key items, then give one specific example with a linking word like “for example” or “such as.” Reduce repetition and correct grammar (e.g. “I need to remember homework, tests and where I left my keys”). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

示例: I need to remember several daily things, such as homework, test dates and where I put my keys. For example, I often check a to-do list each morning so I don’t forget what I must study that day.

建议: Start with a clear method statement, then briefly explain how you use it and acknowledge a limitation. Avoid repeating words and be specific about the tool (e.g. “notebook” or “phone app”). Use linking words like “then” or “however.” Keep the answer to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I write important things down in a small notebook and also use reminders on my phone. Then I check the list daily; however, sometimes I still forget if I don’t review it regularly.

× Usually I forget more, uh, often, but when I want to memorize something, something for a test or, or, uh, or maybe memorizing a word or that I learned in school, it's, it will be hard for me.

✓ Usually I forget things often, but when I want to memorize something, for a test or a word I learned in school, it is hard for me.

The original sentence uses inconsistent tense forms and unnecessary filler words. 'Forget more' is incorrect; use 'forget things often' to express frequency (present simple). 'It's, it will be hard' mixes present and future; keep present simple 'it is hard' to match habitual ability. Remove repeated words and fillers for clarity. (grammar_problem_type_id:6)

× Usually I forget passwords for my phone or my card, bank card and this is like a struggle for me because the PIN is very important as you know, for for opening passwords or something like that.

✓ Usually I forget passwords for my phone or my bank card, and this is a struggle for me because the PIN is very important for unlocking them.

The phrase 'my card, bank card' is redundant; combine as 'my bank card'. 'For for opening passwords' is incorrect; use 'for unlocking them' or 'for accessing accounts'. Also remove filler phrase 'like'. Maintain present simple to describe habitual behavior. (grammar_problem_type_id:17)

× Things that I'll have to remember things to things that I studied in school, if I have homework tests or where I left my keys, for example, and I have struggle in this plus I have to memorize like have I studied today or no or what is required from me for tomorrow.

✓ I have to remember things I studied in school, such as homework and tests, where I left my keys, and whether I studied today or what is required of me for tomorrow.

The original sentence contains repeated words and incorrect structure. Replace future 'I'll have to remember' with present simple 'I have to remember' for habitual needs. Use 'what is required of me' instead of 'required from me'. Remove filler 'like' and restructure into a clear list. (grammar_problem_type_id:6)

× I write them down. I have a small notes that I that I usually write in it my tasks and what is required from me and the deadlines and how to do it and from where.

✓ I write them down. I have small notes where I usually write my tasks, what is required of me, the deadlines, how to do things, and the sources.

Use 'small notes' (no 'a') because 'notes' is plural. 'That I that I usually write in it' is ungrammatical; use 'where I usually write'. 'Required from me' should be 'required of me'. 'From where' is better as 'the sources'. (grammar_problem_type_id:22)

× I get the the resources and but sometimes I forget the thing. That is a huge mistake.

✓ I get the resources, but sometimes I forget things. That is a big mistake.

Remove duplicate 'the the' and use plural 'things' instead of singular 'the thing' for general reference. 'Huge' is acceptable but 'big' is more natural here. Maintain present simple for habitual actions. (grammar_problem_type_id:6)