记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. "Not really, I find it difficult to memorise things"), then give one specific reason and one brief example. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Link ideas with a simple connector like "because" or "so".

示例: Not really — I find it difficult to memorise things because I rely on repetition and still forget details. For example, when I try to learn a phone number I repeat it several times but often need to check it again later.

建议: Answer directly and correct grammar. Use one clear example and link cause and result (e.g. "so" or "therefore"). Avoid hesitations and repeated phrases. Focus on the event and its consequence in two or three sentences.

示例: Yes, I have. I often forget my keys at home, so I sometimes have to call a family member to let me in. This usually happens when I'm in a hurry and forget to check my bag.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and then specify a few concrete tasks. Use correct verb forms and sequencing words (for example "first", "also"). Keep to three or four concise sentences and avoid vague phrases like "new making new things".

示例: I need to remember a range of business tasks every day. For example, I manage our social media posts, arrange and send shipments, and update product listings on the website. I normally plan these tasks in order of priority each morning.

建议: Start with a clear statement of your main method, then give one or two specific tools and a brief example of how you use them. Use accurate phrasing (e.g. "I use a notebook" and "Google Calendar has an alarm") and link with connectors like "also" or "for example".

示例: I mainly use a notebook and Google Calendar to remember important things. For example, I write daily tasks in my notebook and add deadlines to Google Calendar with an alarm, so my phone reminds me when a shipment needs to be sent.

× Actually, I'm not good at memorizing things because generally I try to memorize and repeat all the things that I need to keep in mind.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at memorizing things because I generally try to memorise and repeat everything I need to remember.

The original sentence uses awkward word order and redundant phrases. 'Generally' is better placed before the verb 'try'. 'All the things that I need to keep in mind' is wordy; 'everything I need to remember' is more natural. Also maintain consistent British English spelling 'memorise'. Keep present simple tense for habits.

× Yes, actually I generally forgot my keys at home, so I have a trouble remembering where is my where are my keys and then I need to call the people from my relatives to open the door for me.

✓ Yes, actually I generally forget my keys at home, so I have trouble remembering where my keys are and then I need to call relatives to open the door for me.

Use present simple 'forget' for habitual actions rather than past 'forgot'. 'Have a trouble' is incorrect; use 'have trouble' or 'have difficulty'. The clause 'where is my where are my keys' has incorrect word order for an indirect question; it should be 'where my keys are'. 'The people from my relatives' is wordy; 'relatives' is sufficient.

× I need to remember all the tasks I need to do in my daily life like business.

✓ I need to remember all the tasks I need to do in my daily life, such as work for my business.

The sentence repeats 'need' but is acceptable; however 'like business' is unidiomatic. Use 'such as' or 'for my business' to clarify. Maintain present simple for routine actions.

× I have a small business so I need to do the tasks like running to social media and also sending our shipments and new making new things at the website.

✓ I have a small business, so I need to do tasks such as managing social media, sending our shipments and creating new things on the website.

Use the -ing or gerund forms correctly: 'running to social media' is incorrect; 'managing social media' or 'running our social media' is appropriate. 'Sending our shipments' is fine. 'New making new things at the website' is ungrammatical; use 'creating new items on the website' or 'creating new content on the website'. Ensure parallel structure in the list.

× I use notebook to remember.

✓ I use a notebook to remember things.

English requires an article before singular countable nouns: 'a notebook'. Also add 'things' to clarify what is being remembered.

× Also sometimes I use Google Calendar because it has a a alarm online so I am using all.

✓ Also, sometimes I use Google Calendar because it has an online alarm, so I use it for everything.

Remove the duplicated 'a'. Before a vowel sound use 'an', so 'an alarm'. 'Online alarm' is more natural than 'a alarm online'. 'I am using all' is ungrammatical—use 'I use it for everything' or 'I use it all the time'.

× I use my telephone all the time so it is very easy to remember all my tasks when I entered them into the Google Calendar.

✓ I use my phone all the time, so it is very easy to remember all my tasks when I enter them into Google Calendar.

Maintain present simple 'enter' for habitual action rather than past 'entered'. 'Telephone' is correct but 'phone' is more natural. Omit 'the' before 'Google Calendar' in most contexts. Ensure tense consistency: use present for routine actions.