记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and directly answer the question first, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid repeating ideas and ensure natural phrasing (e.g., use "memorize" consistently). Use a linking word to connect your general statement to the example.

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, in primary and secondary school I needed far more time than my classmates to revise for dictation and exams, so I often prepared earlier to make sure I remembered key facts.

建议: Correct the contradiction in the opening sentence and state the incident clearly. Use linking words to show consequence (e.g., "because", "so", "after that") and give a specific detail about the solution you used.

示例: Yes, I have. I once missed an important university exam because I wrote the wrong date on my calendar, so I started using phone reminders and a planner; since then I set alerts a week and a day before important events to avoid mistakes.

建议: Remove repetition ("when I when I") and give one or two specific examples of tasks with brief details. Use linking words (e.g., "so", "for example") and precise vocabulary ("deadlines", "meetings", "assignments").

示例: I need to remember deadlines and scheduled tasks, especially during work hours, because I often have several assessments. For example, I use a task list and set phone reminders for each deadline so I can prioritise assignments and attend all important classes.

建议: Clarify unclear phrases (e.g., "P dates") and avoid small grammar errors. Give one or two concrete examples of how you set reminders (e.g., multiple alerts, labels) and use linking words to make the sequence clear.

示例: I usually write important items in my phone and set multiple reminders. For example, I add calendar events with a notification one week and one day before, and label them ("Exam" or "Meeting") so I have time to prepare.

× Yes, definitely I have not.

✓ No, I have definitely not.

The original sentence word order is incorrect for a negative present perfect response. Use 'No, I have definitely not' to properly negate and place the adverb 'definitely' after the auxiliary 'have'. Also this fits the present perfect tense required to say you have not forgotten something important. Suggestion: Place adverbs like 'definitely' after the auxiliary verb in perfect tenses (have/has).

× I'm not very good at memorizing dates so I once missed it an important university exam because I had written the wrong day on my calendar.

✓ I'm not very good at memorizing dates, so I once missed an important university exam because I had written the wrong day on my calendar.

The original contains awkward word order 'missed it an important university exam' and punctuation. Remove 'it' and place the article 'an' before 'important university exam'. Also add a comma before 'so' to link the clauses clearly. The past perfect 'had written' is correct because the writing happened before missing the exam. Suggestion: Omit unnecessary pronouns, use correct articles, and punctuate compound sentences with a comma before coordinating conjunctions like 'so'.

× After that I started using phone reminders and planner so it hasn't happened again.

✓ After that I started using phone reminders and a planner, so it hasn't happened again.

The original omits the article before 'planner' and treats 'planner' as uncountable. Add the indefinite article 'a' to refer to one planner. Also add a comma before 'so'. Suggestion: Use 'a' or 'the' with countable singular nouns (a planner).

× In my daily life, I need to remember when I when I must do each task, especially during my working hours, because I often have several assessments and deadlines to meet.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember when I must do each task, especially during my working hours, because I often have several assessments and deadlines to meet.

The sentence mistakenly repeats 'when I', creating redundancy. Remove the repeated words to correct the sentence structure. The tense and clauses are otherwise correct. Suggestion: Read sentences aloud to catch accidental repetitions and delete duplicates.

× I usually write important things in my phone and set reminders to all alarms.

✓ I usually write important things in my phone and set reminders and alarms.

The phrase 'write ... in my phone' is acceptable but 'set reminders to all alarms' is incorrect: you set reminders or alarms, not set reminders to alarms. Combine as 'set reminders and alarms' or 'set reminders and alarm notifications'. Suggestion: Use verbs that collocate with nouns: 'set reminders', 'set alarms', not 'set reminders to alarms'.

× I also mark P dates in my calendar so I get notifications beforehand which helps me prepare for events on time.

✓ I also mark important dates in my calendar so I get notifications beforehand, which helps me prepare for events on time.

The original 'P dates' is unclear and likely a typo. Replace with 'important dates'. Also add a comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which helps me...' and keep verb agreement 'helps' referring to the whole preceding clause. Suggestion: Avoid unclear abbreviations or typos; use full words like 'important dates'.