记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more natural and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, avoid redundancy and grammar errors, and add one short supporting detail using a linking word. Keep to 2–3 sentences and correct tense and word forms.

示例: Yes, I’m quite good at memorising things. For example, I often remember short lists and facts by repeating them to myself, which helps me retain small details.

建议: Give a direct answer and a clear reason with coherent linking. Avoid categorical claims like “never” unless certain. Use correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and provide a specific example.

示例: Not often — I rarely forget important things because I use simple strategies. For example, I usually remember people’s names and appointment times by repeating them aloud, so I don’t need to write them down.

建议: Be specific and concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence listing key daily tasks, use linking words to group similar items, and avoid hesitations and unclear phrases. Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'wear appropriate clothes').

示例: In my daily life I need to remember basic tasks, such as brushing my teeth and getting dressed appropriately, and also to contact friends when we plan to meet. I try to keep a short checklist so I don’t forget these routines.

建议: Explain your method clearly and concisely. Start with a topic sentence that names the technique, then give one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Correct phrasing (e.g., 'I use repetition' rather than 'self remembering').

示例: I usually remember important things by using repetition and routines. For instance, I repeat appointments aloud and make them part of my daily routine, so they become automatic and easy to recall.

× Yes, I enjoy it everywhere and every time.

✓ Yes, I enjoy it everywhere and at any time.

The phrase 'every time' is correct but 'at any time' is a more natural collocation with 'everywhere' when speaking generally. Also 'enjoy it everywhere and every time' has awkward adverb placement; changing to 'everywhere and at any time' improves naturalness and parallel structure.

× I don't know how it works but I always everyday memorizing a lot of little things and I like it.

✓ I don't know how it works, but I always memorize a lot of little things every day, and I like it.

The original uses 'memorizing' after 'always' which requires the base verb form when used with 'always' in simple present: 'always memorize'. 'Everyday' is an adjective; the adverb 'every day' is needed. Also punctuation and word order were adjusted for clarity.

× No, never, because I always try to remember for little.

✓ No, never, because I always try to remember little things.

'Remember for little' is ungrammatical. The intended meaning is 'remember little things.' This corrects word choice and order to match standard English.

× Little things especially is that important thing for me.

✓ Little things, especially, are very important to me.

Subject-verb agreement and word order: 'Little things' is plural so use 'are'. 'That important thing' is incorrect; 'very important to me' expresses the idea. Punctuation added for clarity.

× And for example I usually remember people's name and appointment times without writing them down.

✓ For example, I usually remember people's names and appointment times without writing them down.

'People's name' should be plural 'names' when referring to multiple people. Added comma after 'For example' for naturalness.

× I try to remember, uh, brush my teeth and uh, wear a Sophie clothes and uh, uh, often try to communicate with my friends and that's all.

✓ I try to remember to brush my teeth, to wear proper clothes, and to contact my friends often; that's all.

Infinitive 'to' is required after 'remember' when indicating intended actions: 'remember to brush'. 'Wear a Sophie clothes' is ungrammatical—'proper clothes' or 'my clothes' is better; 'Sophie' seems incorrect. Reordered items into a parallel list and removed filler 'uh' for clarity.

× It's so simple because it is self remembering because I try to do this what every day and it's so easy for me and I just remember my important things and try to repeat this one in my own.

✓ It's simple because it is self-reminding: I do it every day, so it's easy for me. I just remember important things and try to repeat them on my own.

Multiple issues: 'self remembering' is nonstandard; 'self-reminding' or 'remembering by myself' is better. 'Do this what every day' is ungrammatical; use 'I do it every day'. 'Repeat this one in my own' should be 'repeat them on my own'. Also split into clearer sentences and corrected pronoun agreement.