记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要更直接和自然；简洁表达主题句后，用一到两句具体支持细节并使用连接词使语流更连贯。注意语法（memorising → memorizing 美式或 memorising 英式一致，which can remind me don't forget → which reminds me not to forget）。

示例: Not really. I’m not good at remembering everyday things. So I usually write a shopping list on paper or use a notepad app, which helps remind me so I don’t forget anything.

建议: 回答要更清晰有条理，先给直接肯定句，然后用具体细节说明发生了什么并用连接词表原因和结果。改正一些语法和用词（take some cash → bring any cash；mobile discharged → phone ran out of battery）。

示例: Yes. Last summer I forgot to bring any cash for emergencies because my phone ran out of battery and I couldn't use cards. As a result, I had to ask a stranger for help to get some money.

建议: 结构清楚但可用更自然表达并加入连接词使句子更流畅。把复数和冠词处理正确（assignments and competitions；my study life 或 my student life）。提供更具体例子会更好。

示例: I need to remember deadlines for my assignments and competitions because they affect my academic progress. Besides, I always keep a list of items I need to buy online so I won’t miss anything.

建议: 回答自然但可更简洁并使用更地道表达（notepad app → notes app；alarm clocks → alarms）。用连接词组织要点并举一个短例子说明效果。

示例: I usually use the notes app on my phone to record important things, and I set alarms to remind me at the right time. For example, I’ll set an alarm a day before a deadline to make sure I finish my work.

× I have to write the items on the paper or record them in the notepad app which can remind me don't forget anything.

✓ I have to write the items on paper or record them in the notepad app which can remind me not to forget anything.

句中“remind me don't forget anything”结构不正确。动词remind后面常跟不定式“to + 动词”或动名词短语，但要表示提醒某人不要做某事，应使用“remind me not to do sth.”。另外，“write the items on the paper”中不定冠词“the”通常可省略，习惯说法为“write ... on paper”。建议使用“remind me not to forget anything”和“write ... on paper”。

× Yes, last summer holiday I forgot to take some cash which can cope with some emergencies when my mobile discharged.

✓ Yes, last summer holiday I forgot to take some cash that could cope with emergencies when my mobile ran out of charge.

句中时态和从句关系不当。“which can cope with some emergencies”用现在时态不符合过去时语境，且关系代词用“that”更自然。“when my mobile discharged”不地道，应使用过去式短语“ran out of charge”或“ran out of battery”。因此需将从句动词改为过去式并调整措辞。

× However, I forgot that day and I asked a stranger to help me.

✓ However, I forgot it that day and I asked a stranger to help me.

句中缺乏明确宾语。说“I forgot that day”在意思上不清楚，应补上宾语如“it”指代前文提到的“to take some cash”。时态（过去式）本身正确，但需补全宾语以使句子完整和明确。

× Firstly, I need to remember the deadlines of my assignment and competition, which are important for me in my studying life.

✓ Firstly, I need to remember the deadlines of my assignments and competitions, which are important for me in my student life.

“my assignment and competition”在此语境中应为可数复数（多个任务和比赛），所以要用复数形式“assignments and competitions”。此外，“my studying life”表达不自然，常用“my student life”。请注意名词单复数与习惯搭配的正确使用。

× Additionally, I always record the items that I need to buy online.

✓ Additionally, I always record the items that I need to buy online.

该句语法本身正确，无需修改。保留原句。

× I usually record the important things in my notepad app on my mobile phone.

✓ I usually record important things in my notepad app on my mobile phone.

句中“the important things”可根据语境省略定冠词，使用不带冠词的“important things”更自然。原句虽可接受，但去掉“the”使表达更通用。

× What's more, I always set some alarm clocks which can remind me all the time and sometimes I will record some details of the things.

✓ What's more, I always set alarms that can remind me at the right time, and sometimes I record some details about the things.

原句中“some alarm clocks which can remind me all the time”表达不准确，“all the time”意思是“始终不断”，应改为表示“在合适时间提醒”的说法，例如“remind me at the right time”。“set some alarm clocks”可简化为“set alarms”。“sometimes I will record”中“will”在此处不必要，使用一般现在时“I record”更自然；“record some details of the things”应改为“record some details about the things”。