记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答应更自然并直接回应问题，开头用主题句表明态度，然后用一到两句具体例子支持。避免重复和语法错误，注意时态和词汇搭配。例如“things I have played before”表达不清，应改为具体活动或物品。

示例: Not really — I often struggle with memory. For instance, I frequently forget where I put my keys or the names of people I met briefly, which can be annoying.

建议: 回答要用正确时态并更礼貌地表达情绪。避免填充词（umm, uh），用连词连接细节并说明后果或感受。不要用“disgusting”描述自己，改用“embarrassing”或“upsetting”。

示例: Yes. Last month I forgot my mother’s birthday, which was really embarrassing. I apologized and planned a special dinner to make it up to her.

建议: 答案需更简洁自然，主句清晰，随后用连接词补充细节。要注意语法，改正“the plan what I did before I need to do today”这类错误，使用短语如“my plans for the day”。

示例: I need to remember my plans for the day, such as appointments and tasks. So I usually make a to‑do list on my phone to keep everything organized.

建议: 表述要更流畅并减少重复。用一两句说明工具和方法，同时可提及结果或频率。避免过多“uh”并使用合适时态（present simple）。

示例: I use my phone to set reminders and calendar events for important dates. That way I get notifications at the right time and rarely forget important tasks.

× I always forget things easily.

✓ I always forget things easily.

无语法需改动。句子现在时使用正确，表达习惯性动作。

× For example I usually forget the things I have played before.

✓ For example, I usually forget the things I have done before.

“played”通常用于玩耍或演奏，不适用于泛指“做过的事情”。此处应使用“done”表示一般的过去经历。建议记住常用动词搭配，遇到泛指动作时用“do/done”。（简体中文）

× Yes, I often forgot some important things.

✓ Yes, I often forget some important things.

句子以现在为背景（“often”表频率），应使用一般现在时“forget”，而不是过去式“forgot”。建议注意“often”与现在时连用。

× For example, umm, last month I forget my mother's birthday.

✓ For example, umm, last month I forgot my mother's birthday.

句中有时间状语“last month”，表示过去，因此动词应为过去式“forgot”。注意时间状语决定时态选择。

× Uh, it's very disgusting and I said sorry to her.

✓ Uh, I felt very bad and I apologised to her.

“disgusting”意为令人厌恶，通常用于描述事物，而非自己的感受。此处描述情绪用“felt very bad”或“felt ashamed”，并用“apologised”替代口语“said sorry”。建议学习常见情绪形容词与适当的动词搭配。

× I need to memorize the plan what I did before I need to do today, so I always list this plan in my phone to make me remember it.

✓ I need to memorise the plan of what I did before and what I need to do today, so I always put this plan in my phone to help me remember it.

句中“what”用法混乱，且多次使用“need”冗余。改为“the plan of what I did before and what I need to do today”更清晰；“list this plan in my phone”不自然，改为“put this plan in my phone”或“enter it into my phone”。最后用“help me remember”更符合英语习惯。建议理清从句结构，减少重复。

× I would use my phone to, uh, take a record of these important things and I will write them to the phone reminders so my phone will, uh, record me at the right time.

✓ I use my phone to record these important things and I put them into my phone reminders so my phone will remind me at the right time.

原句混用“would”和“will”，时态和语气不一致。“take a record of”也不地道，通常用“record”或“make a note of”。“write them to the phone reminders”不自然，改为“put them into my phone reminders”。最后应是“remind me”而非“record me”。建议保持时态一致，使用常见固定搭配。