巧克力— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi thiếu tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'The reason that I cried' không phù hợp với ngữ cảnh. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, tự nhiên và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy eating chocolate because it helps me relax and reduce stress after long hours of studying.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, có cấu trúc rõ ràng và sử dụng liên từ để nối ý. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý cách dùng từ như 'feeling guilt' nên là 'feeling guilty'. Hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I eat chocolate every day, but only a small piece because it contains a lot of sugar. Therefore, I try to eat it in moderation to stay healthy and avoid feeling guilty.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên, ví dụ 'keep it habit' nên là 'keep the habit' và 'cheer up myself' nên là 'cheer myself up'. Hãy luyện tập cách dùng cụm từ và cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid, usually just a small piece. Even now, I still keep this habit because it helps to cheer myself up.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như 'It's a squid' không đúng nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và hoàn chỉnh câu trả lời với các ý rõ ràng, tránh nói dở dang.

示例: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it has a unique and delicious taste, along with a pleasant aroma. Moreover, it is often associated with happiness and celebrations.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có lỗi nhỏ về số nhiều 'combinations' nên là 'combination'. Ngoài ra, câu 'the way it smells in my mouth' nghe không tự nhiên. Hãy sử dụng cách diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp.

示例: My favourite flavour is milk chocolate because it combines creamy milk and rich cocoa, giving it a smooth and sweet taste that I really enjoy.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều ngập ngừng và lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'enjoy it delicious taste' nên là 'enjoy its delicious taste'. Bạn nên luyện tập nói trôi chảy, tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác và nói dở dang. Hãy trình bày ý tưởng rõ ràng và mạch lạc.

示例: Yes, I think chocolate makes a great gift because most people enjoy its delicious taste. Also, it can lift their mood and show that you care about them.

× The reason that I cried is that it helps me reduce the stress after a long hours of studying in the class.

✓ The reason that I cried was that it helped me reduce the stress after a long hour of studying in the class.

The sentence refers to a past event ('I cried'), so the verbs should be in the past tense ('was', 'helped'). Also, 'a long hours' is incorrect because 'hours' is plural and 'a' is singular; it should be 'a long hour' or 'many hours'. Here, 'a long hour' fits better.

× The reason that I cried is that it helps me reduce the stress after a long hours of studying in the class.

✓ The reason that I cried is that it helps me reduce the stress after a long hour of studying in the class.

The phrase 'a long hours' is incorrect because 'a' is used with singular nouns, but 'hours' is plural. It should be 'a long hour' or 'many hours'.

× And now, as I have mentioned before, I still keep it habit and I see it's a good way to cheer up myself.

✓ And now, as I have mentioned before, I still keep the habit and I see it's a good way to cheer myself up.

The phrase 'keep it habit' is incorrect; it should be 'keep the habit'. Also, 'cheer up myself' is incorrect word order; the correct phrase is 'cheer myself up'.

× Well, I think chocolate is popular worthwhile because it has a distinctive and delicious taste that many people enjoy.

✓ Well, I think chocolate is popular and worthwhile because it has a distinctive and delicious taste that many people enjoy.

The word 'popular worthwhile' is incorrect because two adjectives need a conjunction to connect them properly. Adding 'and' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× It's a squid and has a pleasant aroma which makes it very appealing.

✓ It's a sweet and has a pleasant aroma which makes it very appealing.

The word 'squid' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended word is 'sweet' to describe chocolate. 'Squid' is a noun referring to a sea creature, which does not fit here.

× Also, chocolate is associated with happiness and as.

✓ Also, chocolate is associated with happiness and joy.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and as', which is incomplete and unclear. It should be completed with a proper noun or phrase to make sense.

× Of course, milk chocolate is a perfect combinations of creamy milk and rich cocoa, which gives it a smooth and sweet flavor that appeals to many people.

✓ Of course, milk chocolate is a perfect combination of creamy milk and rich cocoa, which gives it a smooth and sweet flavor that appeals to many people.

The word 'combinations' is plural but should be singular 'combination' to agree with 'a perfect' which is singular.

× For me, this is the best choice because I enjoy it most days and the way it smells in my mouth.

✓ For me, this is the best choice because I enjoy it most days and the way it tastes in my mouth.

The phrase 'the way it smells in my mouth' is incorrect because we perceive taste in the mouth, not smell. It should be 'the way it tastes in my mouth'.

× I think chocolate is a great gift because most people can enjoy it delicious taste and moreover, this kind of presence, uh, look like, uh, mental medicine, which have to, with their mood, express the thoughtfulness to other people.

✓ I think chocolate is a great gift because most people can enjoy its delicious taste and moreover, this kind of present looks like mental medicine, which helps improve their mood and expresses thoughtfulness to other people.

Several errors: 'it delicious taste' should be 'its delicious taste' (possessive pronoun). 'Presence' is incorrect; it should be 'present' meaning gift. 'Look like' should be 'looks like' to agree with singular subject. 'Which have to, with their mood, express' is unclear and incorrect; corrected to 'which helps improve their mood and expresses thoughtfulness' for clarity and grammar.