巧克力— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu sentence onek boro. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke chhoto rakhte, ar grammar thik korte. Apni jodi specific karon den, tahole answer aro bhalo hobe.

示例: Yes, I have loved eating chocolate since my childhood. I usually buy it from the grocery shop. I like it because it helps increase brain stamina. Also, my relatives often gave me chocolates when I was young.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu redundancy ache, ar kichu sentence onek boro. Apni chesta korun answer ke sohoje bujhte paren emon vabe bolte. Specific time frame diye bolte paren koto bar chocolate khan.

示例: I eat chocolate almost every day. Whenever I get some, I eat it immediately. For example, last winter I bought chocolates from India worth 10,000 takas, and they tasted delicious.

建议: Apnar grammar e kichu bhul ache, ar sentence gulo onek boro. Apni chesta korun simple ar shothik grammar use korte. Apni specific bhabe bolte paren apnar childhood er chocolate khawar obhiggota.

示例: I don't clearly remember if I ate chocolate as a kid. But as I grew up, I started loving chocolate. Now, I often buy it for myself and sometimes give it to my loved ones.

建议: Apnar answer bhalo, kintu kichu sentence onek boro ar kichu linking word use korte paren jate answer ta aro logical hoy. Apni aro specific karon dite paren.

示例: Chocolate is popular worldwide for many reasons. Firstly, it is a common gift for birthdays and other occasions. Secondly, it helps improve concentration and boosts energy. Therefore, many people like chocolate.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu sentence onek boro. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke chhoto rakhte, ar grammar thik korte. Apni aro specific bhabe flavor er karon bolte paren.

示例: My favorite flavor is chocolate with vanilla. I find dark chocolate too bitter and less sweet. Chocolate with vanilla tastes delicious and has a nice flavor.

建议: Apnar answer bhalo, kintu kichu grammar mistake ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke chhoto rakhte ar grammar thik korte. Apni aro specific example dite paren.

示例: Yes, chocolate is a good gift because most people like it. However, some may not prefer chocolate. In such cases, people should choose other gifts for birthdays or special occasions.

× I love chocolate because it increase the stamina of our brain

✓ I love chocolate because it increases the stamina of our brain

The verb 'increase' should be in the third person singular form 'increases' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue where the verb must match the subject in number and person.

× Whenever I get chocolate, I love to eat them instant.

✓ Whenever I get chocolate, I love to eat it instantly.

The pronoun 'them' is plural but 'chocolate' is uncountable or singular here, so 'it' should be used. Also, 'instant' is an adjective; the adverb 'instantly' is correct to describe the verb 'eat'. This corrects pronoun and adverb usage.

× I didn't remember whether I ate chocolate or not when I were a kid

✓ I don't remember whether I ate chocolate or not when I was a kid

The phrase 'didn't remember' is incorrect for a present recollection; 'don't remember' fits better. Also, 'were' should be 'was' to agree with the singular subject 'I' in past tense. This corrects tense and subject-verb agreement.

× but as I grew up, I love chocolate and I always try to buy chocolate for me

✓ but as I grew up, I loved chocolate and I always tried to buy chocolate for myself

Since 'grew up' is past tense, the following verbs should also be in past tense for consistency: 'love' to 'loved' and 'try' to 'tried'. Also, 'for me' should be 'for myself' to correctly use the reflexive pronoun.

× sometimes I give chocolate to the person that I love.

✓ sometimes I give chocolate to the person whom I love.

The relative pronoun 'that' is less appropriate for people; 'whom' is correct as the object of the verb 'love'. This improves pronoun usage.

× There are many driving factors behind the popularity of chocolate as chocolate is considered a good present for anyone's birthday or any other occasions

✓ There are many driving factors behind the popularity of chocolate because chocolate is considered a good present for anyone's birthday or any other occasion

The conjunction 'as' can be ambiguous; 'because' clearly indicates cause. Also, 'occasions' should be singular 'occasion' after 'any other' for correct quantifier usage.

× and chocolate is very helpful for concentration and boost energy.

✓ and chocolate is very helpful in concentration and boosting energy.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'helpful in' is correct. Also, parallel structure requires 'boosting' to match 'concentration' as a gerund.

× My favorite flavor of chocolate is chocolate with vanilla because raw chocolate or dark chocolate taste like very hard or raw means less sweet.

✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate is chocolate with vanilla because raw chocolate or dark chocolate tastes very hard or raw, meaning less sweet.

The verb 'taste' should be 'tastes' to agree with singular subject. 'Like' is unnecessary here. 'Means' should be 'meaning' to connect the explanation properly.

× So I prefer chocolate with vanilla that tastes very delicious and the flavor of this awesome.

✓ So I prefer chocolate with vanilla that tastes very delicious and the flavor of this is awesome.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' before 'awesome' to complete the predicate. This corrects sentence structure and pronoun reference.

× But there may be some people who don't like chocolate, and I think in that particular situations people should try another kinds of gift as a birthday present or so on.

✓ But there may be some people who don't like chocolate, and I think in those particular situations people should try other kinds of gifts as birthday presents or so on.

'That particular situations' should be 'those particular situations' to agree in number. 'Another kinds' is incorrect; 'other kinds' is correct for plural. 'Gift' should be plural 'gifts' to match 'kinds'. Also, 'a birthday present' should be plural to match 'gifts'.