巧克力— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
考生
Yes, I really enjoy eating chocolate because it is sweet, which helps me, which help my brain to release dopamine, which makes me feel happy and relaxed. And there are many kinds of chocolates such as white chocolate, dark chocolate and matcha chocolate. And I especially like dark chocolate because it has a rich taste.
考官
How often do you eat chocolate?
考生
Maybe twice a week. And because I really have to control control myself about eating chocolate because chocolates has high calories which is not good for keeping fit and umm, chocolate sometimes are too sweet that eating too much of them may cause a sickness.
考官
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
考生
Yes, uh, my parents didn't allow me to eat chocolate because they think chocolate are not were not good for my teeth. Umm, but the more they don't didn't want me to do so, the more I want to do so. So I, umm, I always eat chocolate as as long as I catch captured up opportunity to eat it.
考官
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
考生
First it is sweet and if someone someone gets faint because he or she didn't eat breakfast eating giving by giving him a bark of chocolate, she and she or he will feel better. And moreover, umm it is cheap so everyone can afford it and especially kids like.
考官
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
考生
My favorite flavor of chocolate is dark chocolate because it has an intense and slightly bitter taste, which I find more satisfying than overly sweet white or milk ones. I also like that it contains less sugar, making it a healthier option. Overall. Its rich flavor makes it perfect for me.
考官
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
考生
Yes, I think chocolates are the best gifts if you have no clue of what things to give as a gift because everyone loves chocolates and you will not have to worry about if he or she will feel unhappy after receiving it. Moreover, uh, you know couples send chocolates on Valentina days.
评估
总分
语法
× because chocolates has high calories which is not good for keeping fit
✓ because chocolates have high calories which are not good for keeping fit
这里'chocolates'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'have'，而'calories'也是复数，后面的谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'。
× chocolate sometimes are too sweet that eating too much of them may cause a sickness
✓ chocolate sometimes is too sweet that eating too much of it may cause sickness
'chocolate'是不可数名词，应使用单数谓语'is'，代词也应使用单数形式'it'，'sickness'前不需要冠词。
× they think chocolate are not were not good for my teeth
✓ they think chocolate is not good for my teeth
'chocolate'是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式'is'，且时态应保持一致。
× they think chocolate are not were not good for my teeth
✓ they thought chocolate was not good for my teeth
句子描述过去的情况，动词时态应使用过去式'thought'和'was'。
× the more they don't didn't want me to do so
✓ the more they didn't want me to do so
否定助动词'did'后不需要再加'don't'，正确的过去式否定形式是'didn't'。
× I always eat chocolate as as long as I catch captured up opportunity to eat it
✓ I always ate chocolate as long as I caught up the opportunity to eat it
描述过去习惯动作，动词应使用过去式'ate'和'caught'，'captured up'用法错误，应为'caught up'。
× if someone someone gets faint because he or she didn't eat breakfast eating giving by giving him a bark of chocolate
✓ if someone gets faint because he or she didn't eat breakfast, giving him a bar of chocolate
重复单词'someone'应删除，'bark'应为'bar'，句子结构需调整以保持通顺。
× she and she or he will feel better
✓ he or she will feel better
重复且顺序混乱，应简化为'he or she'。
× everyone loves chocolates and you will not have to worry about if he or she will feel unhappy after receiving it
✓ everyone loves chocolate and you will not have to worry about whether he or she will feel unhappy after receiving it
'chocolate'作为不可数名词不加复数，'worry about if'应改为'worry about whether'。
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