巧克力— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is quite short and contains grammatical errors. Try to form a complete sentence and add a bit more detail to explain why you like chocolate. Also, avoid redundancy and ensure your sentence is natural.

示例: Yes, I enjoy eating chocolate because it has a rich, sweet flavour that I find very satisfying.

建议: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and is a bit unclear. Try to use correct verb forms and connect your ideas with linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

示例: I usually eat chocolate when I feel exhausted after working for a long time because it helps me feel refreshed.

建议: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use past tense when talking about childhood and be more specific about the special occasions. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

示例: No, I didn't eat chocolate often as a child because my family didn't allow me to have sweets on my own. I only had chocolate on special occasions like festivals or family celebrations.

建议: Your answer contains grammar mistakes and some unclear vocabulary. Use correct verb forms and explain the benefits more clearly. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas.

示例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and also helps the body produce endorphins, which make people feel happy.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and linking words.

示例: My favourite flavour is dark chocolate because it is less sweet, so I don't feel guilty when I eat it.

建议: Your answer has grammar and vocabulary errors. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, try to provide a reason why giving chocolate as a gift is good, using linking words for coherence.

示例: Yes, I often give chocolate as a gift to my friends on special occasions like New Year and Valentine's Day because it makes them very happy.

× I like eating chocolate because it's have a flavorful, sweet and satisfying.

✓ I like eating chocolate because it has a flavorful, sweet and satisfying taste.

The verb 'have' is incorrectly used after 'it's' (it is). The correct verb form for third person singular is 'has'. Also, 'satisfying' should be used as an adjective describing 'taste' to complete the sentence meaningfully.

× For me, I. Would eat chocolate when I feel I'm exhausted from doing something such as leading for a long time, it can make me refresh.

✓ For me, I would eat chocolate when I feel exhausted from doing something such as reading for a long time; it can make me feel refreshed.

The modal verb 'would' is used correctly but the sentence has punctuation and word choice errors. 'Leading' should be 'reading' (assuming a typo), and 'refresh' should be 'feel refreshed' to correctly express the effect. Also, the sentence should be split properly for clarity.

× No I don't, my family don't allow me to have a suite on my own so I just got it from a special occasions like a on a kismet event.

✓ No, I didn't. My family didn't allow me to have sweets on my own, so I just got them on special occasions like a kismet event.

The question is about past habits, so past tense should be used ('didn't' instead of 'don't'). 'Suite' is incorrect; the correct word is 'sweets'. Also, 'a special occasions' is incorrect; it should be 'special occasions' without 'a'. 'Got it' should be 'got them' to agree with the plural 'sweets'.

× Because chocolate is not only have a good taste but also has a benefit that it can encourage to make an endophene which make people happy.

✓ Because chocolate not only has a good taste but also has the benefit that it can encourage the production of endorphins which make people happy.

The phrase 'is not only have' is incorrect; it should be 'not only has'. 'Encourage to make' is incorrect; it should be 'encourage the production of'. 'Endophene' is misspelled; the correct word is 'endorphins'. Also, 'make' should agree with plural 'endorphins'.

× My favorite flavor of chocolate is dark because when I taste it dark chocolate I feel not sorry for my body because it's not too sweet.

✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate is dark because when I taste dark chocolate, I don't feel guilty as it is not too sweet.

The sentence is awkward and contains incorrect expressions. 'Feel not sorry for my body' is unnatural; 'don't feel guilty' is more appropriate. Also, 'it dark chocolate' is redundant; 'taste dark chocolate' suffices. Commas are added for clarity.

× Yes it is, I feekily give the chocolate to the people in our special occasions like a new year event, Valentine to my friend. That's make them very happy.

✓ Yes, it is. I usually give chocolate to people on special occasions like New Year and Valentine's Day to my friends. That makes them very happy.

'Feekily' is not a correct word; likely intended 'frequently' or 'usually'. The adverb should be placed correctly. 'A new year event' should be 'New Year'. 'Valentine' should be 'Valentine's Day'. 'That's make' should be 'That makes' to agree with singular subject.