唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'humorous' (nên dùng 'fun' hoặc 'enjoyable') và 'news experience' (nên là 'new experiences'). Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể với liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it is a fun activity that allows me to share new experiences with my friends. Moreover, I can express my emotions strongly through singing, which makes me feel happy and relaxed.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều/số ít và cách dùng từ như 'help' nên là 'helps', 'emotion' nên là 'emotions'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ được liên kết bằng từ nối.

示例: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally because I see singing mainly as a fun way to express my emotions and connect with my friends. Also, I have no intention to become a professional singer.

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'some parents song is' nên là 'some parents' songs are'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn muốn hát cho bố mẹ.

示例: I want to sing for my parents because some parents' songs are very emotional. Through singing, I can express my love for them, especially since I feel shy to tell them directly with words.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và chính tả như 'trade' nên là 'stress'. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý. Hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

示例: Absolutely yes. I think singing can bring happiness to people because when they sing, especially when reaching high notes, they can express their emotions and thoughts. This is a good way to reduce stress and feel more relaxed.

× Absolutely yes, because I think that is a humorous activity that helped me to have a news experience with my friends, or I think that I can express my emotions strongly through singing.

✓ Absolutely yes, because I think that is a humorous activity that has helped me to have a new experience with my friends, or I think that I can express my emotions strongly through singing.

The verb 'helped' should be in the present perfect form 'has helped' to indicate an experience that started in the past and continues to the present. Also, 'news' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'new' to describe the experience.

× Well, I have never learned how to sing because I just regard singing as a fun activity that help me to express my emotion and connect with my friends and I don't have the idea of follow the professional singer.

✓ Well, I have never learned how to sing because I just regard singing as a fun activity that helps me to express my emotion and connect with my friends and I don't have the idea of following the professional singer.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'activity' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'follow' should be in the gerund form 'following' after 'idea of' to be grammatically correct.

× Well, I think that is my parents, you know, some parents song is very emotional and I want to express my own love with them through the singing because I think that is quite shy for me to tell them by my words.

✓ Well, I think that is my parents, you know, some parents' songs are very emotional and I want to express my own love to them through singing because I think it is quite shy for me to tell them with my words.

The phrase 'parents song' should be possessive plural 'parents' songs' to indicate songs belonging to parents. Also, 'song is' should be plural 'songs are' to agree with the plural subject. 'Express my own love with them' should be 'express my own love to them'. 'Through the singing' is better as 'through singing'. 'Tell them by my words' should be 'tell them with my words'. 'That is quite shy' should be 'it is quite shy' or better 'I am quite shy'.

× Absolutely yes. I think that when they sing, especially when they go to high note for example, you can spread your emotion and your thoughts and it a good way to reduce trade because you know you can express your emotion more.

✓ Absolutely yes. I think that when they sing, especially when they go to a high note for example, you can spread your emotion and your thoughts and it is a good way to reduce stress because you know you can express your emotion more.

The phrase 'go to high note' needs an article 'a' before 'high note'. 'It a good way' is missing the verb 'is'. 'Reduce trade' is incorrect; the correct word is 'reduce stress'. These corrections fix the 'there be' issue and vocabulary misuse.