唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中表达了不喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言表达不够自然，且有语法错误，如“sensitive with rhymes”应为“sensitive to rhymes”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复和冗余。

示例: No, I don't enjoy singing because I find it hard to keep up with the rhythm, and sometimes it feels a bit noisy to me.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“we don't have enough MO money to learning how to sing”应为“we didn't have enough money to learn singing”。建议注意时态一致和正确使用动词形式，同时使句子更简洁自然。

示例: No, I haven't. When I was a child, my parents encouraged me to focus on my main subjects, and we didn't have enough money to pay for singing lessons.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，如“likes to singing”应为“likes to sing”，且句子结构不够流畅。建议使用正确的动词形式，并使句子更连贯自然。

示例: I would like to sing for my son because he is a cute little boy who enjoys singing new songs for me after school.

建议: 回答表达不够清晰，词汇使用不当，如“get encourages”应为“get encouraged”。建议使用更准确的词汇和更自然的表达方式。

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music often lifts their spirits and encourages them.

× No, I don't like singing because I'm not sensitive with rhymes and sometimes I think singing is a little bit noisy.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I'm not sensitive to rhymes and sometimes I think singing is a little bit noisy.

介词使用错误。英语中，'sensitive'后面应接介词'to'，表示对某事敏感，而不是'with'。建议记住常用形容词搭配的介词。

× No I haven't so when I was a child my parents encouraged me focus on my major subjects and we don't have enough MO money to learning how to sing.

✓ No, I haven't. So when I was a child, my parents encouraged me to focus on my major subjects and we didn't have enough money to learn how to sing.

时态错误和动词形式错误。'encouraged me focus'应为'encouraged me to focus'，动词不定式需要'to'。'we don't have'应为过去时'didn't have'，因为描述的是过去的情况。'to learning'应为'to learn'，不定式后接动词原形。建议注意时态一致性和动词不定式结构。

× Of course my son, he's a little cute boy. He likes to singing for me after school when he learned a new song.

✓ Of course my son, he's a little cute boy. He likes to sing for me after school when he learns a new song.

动词形式错误。'likes to singing'应为'likes to sing'，'like to do something'后接动词原形。'when he learned'应为一般现在时'when he learns'，因为描述的是习惯性动作。建议注意动词不定式和时态的正确使用。

× Yes, some people can obtain happiness from sounds, but sometimes they also get encourages from sounds.

✓ Yes, some people can obtain happiness from sounds, but sometimes they also get encouraged by sounds.

介词和词形错误。'get encourages'应为'get encouraged'，这里需要过去分词作表语。'from sounds'改为'by sounds'，被动语态中表示动作来源用'by'。建议注意被动语态结构和介词搭配。