唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to be more concise and natural by directly stating your feelings about singing and providing a clear reason. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and clarify your meaning, for example, when you say 'at my home noon in front of people' which is confusing.

示例: Yes, I enjoy singing because I appreciate songs with meaningful lyrics and pleasant melodies. Sometimes, I like to sing at home when my family is around because it makes me feel happy and connected.

建议: Your answer has grammatical errors and repetition. Use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating words. Also, try to organize your answer logically by first stating whether you have formal training, then explaining how you learn singing informally.

示例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. However, I have learned a lot by watching tutorials and performances on YouTube and Instagram.

建议: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. You should directly answer who you want to sing for (e.g., friends, family) and then explain what types of songs you enjoy singing. Also, use plural forms correctly and avoid vague phrases like 'interesting and enjoyable songs' without specifics.

示例: I enjoy singing emotional and comedy songs for my friends and family because these songs are entertaining and can express different feelings.

建议: Your answer contains unclear words like 'Shanghai' and 'SH song' which seem to be errors. Make sure to use correct vocabulary and avoid mistakes. Also, structure your answer clearly by stating your opinion and supporting it with reasons and examples. Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow with linking words.

示例: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings and emotions. Moreover, singing together with friends or family creates enjoyable moments and strengthens relationships.

× No, I have not not learn about singing in my life.

✓ No, I have not learned about singing in my life.

The verb 'learn' should be in the past participle form 'learned' after 'have not' to form the present perfect tense correctly. The double 'not' is also incorrect and should be reduced to one.

× I like to sing for the emotional song and comedy song because it is very interesting and enjoyable songs.

✓ I like to sing emotional and comedy songs because they are very interesting and enjoyable.

The sentence mixes singular and plural forms incorrectly. 'Song' should be plural 'songs' to match 'emotional and comedy' as types, and the verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'songs'.

× Yes, definitely Shanghai can bring happiness to people because with the song we can ex express our feeling and emotion in front of people and also people enjoy the SH song and spend the quality time with their friends or relatives.

✓ Yes, definitely singing can bring happiness to people because with songs we can express our feelings and emotions in front of people, and also people enjoy the songs and spend quality time with their friends or relatives.

The word 'Shanghai' seems to be a mispronunciation or typo for 'singing'. 'Feeling' and 'emotion' should be plural to match the context. 'The SH song' is unclear and should be 'the songs'. 'The quality time' should be 'quality time' without 'the'.