唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to reduce filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your answer sound more natural and confident. Also, use clearer vocabulary; for example, instead of 'intriguing activities to me', say 'an enjoyable activity for me'. Keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and release stress, especially during difficult times.

建议: Focus on correct grammar, such as 'I haven't really learned' instead of 'I don't really learned'. Avoid repetition like 'teach teach'. Also, try to organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words like 'but' or 'however'.

示例: I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I have attended some casual music classes at school where teachers taught me basic singing techniques.

建议: Work on sentence clarity and grammar, for example, 'I find it hard to relax in front of family or friends'. Use linking words like 'however' to connect ideas. Avoid repeating words and ensure subject-verb agreement.

示例: Actually, I prefer to sing for strangers because I find it hard to relax in front of my family or friends; however, with strangers, I can express my emotions and showcase my singing skills better.

建议: Try to avoid filler words and be more concise. Use linking words like 'especially' effectively to connect ideas. Also, explain why singing is therapeutic with specific reasons or examples.

示例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because singing melodies and lyrics out loud helps release stress, making it a therapeutic activity for many people.

× I think singing isn't very, uh, intriguing activities to me.

✓ I think singing isn't a very intriguing activity to me.

The noun 'activities' is plural, but it should be singular 'activity' to agree with the singular subject 'singing' and the article 'a'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× when you're umm, feel stressful and you face a lot of difficulties

✓ when you feel stressful and you face a lot of difficulties

The phrase 'you're feel' is incorrect because 'you're' is a contraction of 'you are' and should be followed by a present participle or adjective, not the base verb 'feel'. The correct form is 'you feel'. This is a present tense issue.

× Well, I don't really learned, I don't really take a specific like singing lessons

✓ Well, I haven't really learned, I don't really take specific singing lessons

The phrase 'I don't really learned' mixes present tense auxiliary 'do' with past tense 'learned', which is incorrect. The correct form is 'I haven't really learned' to express past experience. Also, 'a specific like singing lessons' is awkward; 'specific singing lessons' is better. This is a past tense issue.

× all the classes is not that professional

✓ all the classes are not that professional

The subject 'classes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I would like to sing for any strangers

✓ I would like to sing for any stranger

The word 'any' with plural 'strangers' is awkward here; 'any stranger' (singular) fits better to express an unspecified person. This is a singular and plural issue.

× if I am facing a strangers maybe I can show more about my singing skills

✓ if I am facing strangers maybe I can show more about my singing skills

The phrase 'a strangers' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'strangers'. It should be either 'a stranger' or 'strangers' without 'a'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× all the classes is not that professional

✓ all the classes are not that professional

The subject 'classes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. This is a singular and plural issue.