唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is good but needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'our emotions', you can say 'singing helps me express feelings that are hard to put into words.'

示例: Yes, I like singing because it is a great way to express feelings that are hard to put into words. Moreover, singing allows me to share my emotions through rhythm and melody, which I find very satisfying.

建议: Your answer is unclear and has repetition. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to make it coherent. Also, avoid grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences.

示例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in class 6 because it was part of our school curriculum. Additionally, every Saturday, we had a singing competition which helped me practice and improve my skills.

建议: Your answer is heartfelt but needs better sentence structure and clarity. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: I want to sing for my loved one because singing for her makes me feel happier and more energetic. She always supports and encourages me, which motivates me to enjoy singing even more.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing like 'express the people'.

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it is a powerful way to express emotions that we often keep inside. For instance, when I feel happy or sad, singing helps me release those feelings and feel more relaxed. Furthermore, singing allows me to connect deeply with music.

× There are many kinds of emotion that we don't express, but singing can express our emotions where properly.

✓ There are many kinds of emotions that we don't express, but singing can express our emotions properly.

The word 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' because it refers to multiple types of feelings. Also, 'where properly' is incorrect; it should be 'properly' to correctly modify the verb 'express'.

× Yes, when I was in class 6, I I learned in I learned things in my school because it was one of the part subject in my school and every Saturday we have a singing competition on our.

✓ Yes, when I was in class 6, I learned things in my school because it was one of the part subjects in my school and every Saturday we had a singing competition.

The sentence has repeated words and incorrect tense usage. 'I I learned in I learned' is redundant and should be 'I learned'. 'Part subject' should be plural 'part subjects' to match the context. 'Every Saturday we have' should be past tense 'we had' to maintain consistency with 'when I was in class 6'. Also, 'on our' is incomplete and removed for clarity.

× Yes, when I was in class 6, I I learned in I learned things in my school because it was one of the part subject in my school and every Saturday we have a singing competition on our.

✓ Yes, when I was in class 6, I learned things at my school because it was one of the part subjects in my school and every Saturday we had a singing competition.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'my school'; the correct preposition is 'at' to indicate location of learning.

× I want to sing for my love because when I am singing for her I feel better and much energetic and she always support me and helps me and encourage me to singing.

✓ I want to sing for my love because when I am singing for her I feel better and much more energetic, and she always supports me, helps me, and encourages me to sing.

The pronoun 'she' requires verbs in third person singular form: 'support' should be 'supports', 'encourage' should be 'encourages'. Also, 'much energetic' is incorrect; it should be 'much more energetic'. The phrase 'encourage me to singing' should be 'encourages me to sing' because 'to' is followed by the base verb form.

× That's why I love to sing for her and I always enjoy enjoyed participating because it.

✓ That's why I love to sing for her and I always enjoy participating because of it.

The verb 'enjoyed' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'enjoy'. Also, 'because it' is incomplete; it should be 'because of it' to correctly express the reason.

× Yeah, singing can bring happiness to the people because it is a great way to express the people and it is a powerful way to express different emotion that we often keep inside.

✓ Yeah, singing can bring happiness to people because it is a great way to express people and it is a powerful way to express different emotions that we often keep inside.

The phrase 'the people' is incorrect here; it should be 'people' without 'the' to refer generally. Also, 'different emotion' should be plural 'different emotions' because it refers to multiple feelings.