唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中多次将'singing'误说成'seeing'，影响了表达的准确性。建议注意发音和拼写，确保关键词正确表达。此外，句子结构较为简单，且有语法错误，如'to be tired'应为'tiring'。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress. After studying for a long time, I often feel tired, but singing allows me to relax and feel refreshed.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如'never learn'应为'have never learned'，'a opposite'应为'an opposite'。表达不够连贯，且有重复。建议使用正确的时态和冠词，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更自然。

示例: No, I have never learned how to sing because my mother is against it. I think singing is not a useful skill, so I prefer to focus on studying instead.

建议: 回答中'saying'应为'singing'，影响理解。句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，建议使用连接词如'because'、'so'来使句子更连贯。同时，注意拼写和语法的准确性。

示例: I prefer to sing for myself because I often feel stressed and anxious. Singing helps me release negative emotions and feel more relaxed.

建议: 回答中多次将'singing'误说成'seeing'，且表达不够自然。'have a good emotion'和'brings many positive attitude'语法错误，建议使用更自然的表达，如'feel happy'和'bring positive feelings'。

示例: Yes, I definitely think singing can bring happiness. When people listen to beautiful songs, it makes them feel joyful and positive.

× I like seeing because I think it's a good way to release my stress.

✓ I like singing because I think it's a good way to release my stress.

这里'seeing'是动词'see'的现在分词形式，但句意是表达喜欢唱歌，应该用'singing'。动词+ing形式要与句意匹配。

× You know, during a long time study, it has to be tired, but seeing can give me a sense of relaxing.

✓ You know, during a long time of study, it can be tiring, but singing can give me a sense of relaxation.

'it has to be tired'表达不正确，应该用'it can be tiring'表示可能感到疲惫；'seeing'应为'singing'；'a sense of relaxing'应为'a sense of relaxation'，名词形式更合适。

× No, I never learn how to sing because my mom has a opposite opinion against it.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because my mom has an opposite opinion against it.

'never learn'时态错误，应该用现在完成时'have never learned'；'a opposite'冠词错误，应为'an opposite'。

× I think it's a useless skill so I prefer to.

✓ I think it's a useless skill so I prefer not to.

'prefer to'后面需要动词，句子不完整，应该补充'not to'表示否定。

× I prefer studying than singing, you know?

✓ I prefer studying to singing, you know?

'prefer'后面比较时应使用'prefer A to B'结构，不能用'than'。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× I prefer to sing for myself because the environment I live is often filled with stress, pressure and anxiety and there is a lack of positive emotions.

✓ I prefer to sing for myself because the environment I live in is often filled with stress, pressure and anxiety and there is a lack of positive emotions.

'the environment I live'缺少介词'in'，正确表达应为'the environment I live in'。

× Saying helps me to release those negative feelings and relax.

✓ Singing helps me to release those negative feelings and relax.

'Saying'是动词'say'的现在分词，句意应为'唱歌'，应使用'singing'。

× Yes, it's definitely right. Seeing can bring happiness because when people hear beautiful songs it can make them happy and have a good emotion.

✓ Yes, it's definitely right. Singing can bring happiness because when people hear beautiful songs it can make them happy and have good emotions.

'Seeing'应为'singing'；'have a good emotion'应为'have good emotions'，情感通常用复数形式。

× I think it brings many positive attitude.

✓ I think it brings many positive attitudes.

'attitude'是可数名词，复数形式应为'attitudes'。