唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide clearer reasons.

示例: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially my favorite songs, because they help me relax and refresh my mind.

建议: Improve grammatical accuracy and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, be more specific about how watching videos helps you.

示例: No, I haven't formally learned how to sing, but I often watch singing videos online, which help me improve my technique and learn new styles.

建议: Make your answer more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details.

示例: I like to sing for my baby because he needs to hear songs when he's going to sleep, which helps both of us relax.

建议: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples.

示例: Absolutely. Singing can bring happiness because it is often used as a therapy to help people relax and reduce stress.

× Yes, I like to sing although unfortunately I am not a singer and I am not much good in singing but I will try to sing especially my favorite song that help me to refresh my mind and calm my mind that's why.

✓ Yes, I like to sing although unfortunately I am not a singer and I am not very good at singing but I will try to sing especially my favorite song that helps me to refresh my mind and calm my mind, that's why.

The phrase 'good in singing' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'good at singing'. Also, 'that help me' should be 'that helps me' to agree with the singular noun 'song'. Using correct prepositions and subject-verb agreement improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× No, I don't learn about how to sing, but most of the time I used to watch some singing videos that help me to improve my singing skill.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing, but most of the time I watch some singing videos that help me to improve my singing skills.

The phrase 'I don't learn' is incorrect for past experience; 'I haven't learned' is appropriate. 'Used to watch' implies a past habit no longer done, but the context suggests ongoing action, so 'I watch' is better. Also, 'singing skill' should be plural 'singing skills' to be natural.

× Especially it's for my baby. My baby always need to. Hear songs when he's going to sleep so that will also help both of us to relax.

✓ Especially, it's for my baby. My baby always needs to hear songs when he's going to sleep, so that also helps both of us to relax.

The phrase 'need to. Hear songs' has an unnecessary period and incorrect capitalization. Also, 'need to hear songs' is correct but 'needs' should be third person singular. 'That will also help' is better as 'that also helps' for present habitual action.

× Absolutely. Singing can bring happiness to people, uh, especially in some areas, uh, singing is used as a therapy for relaxing people and reducing stress. So it's important thing to people to hear or uh, singing.

✓ Absolutely. Singing can bring happiness to people, especially in some areas, singing is used as therapy for relaxing people and reducing stress. So it's an important thing for people to hear singing or to sing.

The phrase 'used as a therapy' should be 'used as therapy' without 'a'. 'Important thing to people to hear or singing' is awkward; it should be 'important thing for people to hear singing or to sing'. Correct prepositions and article usage improve clarity.