列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が不自然で文法的に不完全です。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。また、文を簡潔にし、冗長な表現を避けましょう。

示例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I enjoy browsing and discovering new products spontaneously.

建议: 答えは質問に対して直接的ですが、文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。理由を明確にし、文を完結にまとめる練習をしましょう。

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and remember my tasks.

建议: 表現が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、文法的に正しい文章を作ることを心がけましょう。

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to have freedom and not be restricted by plans.

建议: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤りがあります。理由を明確にし、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy writing with a pencil and the sound it makes is satisfying.

× I like hanging out to see many goods in shops and when I.

✓ I like hanging out to see many goods in shops.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and when I.' which is incomplete and causes confusion. Removing the incomplete part makes the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work because if I don't make it umm I don't know what should I do. Today.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because if I don't make it, I don't know what I should do today.

The original sentence has incorrect word order in the clause 'what should I do' and lacks a comma before 'umm'. Correcting the word order to 'what I should do' and adding a comma improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think such people like being freely every day, so they don't like umm.

✓ I think such people like being free every day, so they don't like umm.

'Freely' is an adverb, but the sentence requires an adjective to describe 'being'. Changing 'freely' to 'free' corrects the grammatical error.

× And they don't like being decided.

✓ And they don't like being decided for.

The phrase 'being decided' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'for' clarifies that they don't like decisions being made for them, making the sentence grammatically correct.

× I like making a list on paper because I prefer to white by pencil.

✓ I like making a list on paper because I prefer to write with a pencil.

The verb 'white' is incorrect; it should be 'write'. Also, the preposition 'by' is incorrect here; 'with' is the correct preposition to indicate the instrument used.

× Because I like its sound and also I always the question.

✓ Because I like its sound, and also I always ask the question.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb after 'I always'. Adding 'ask' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.