列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence onek boro. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke chhoto r shothik vabe banate, ar kichu linking word use korte jate answer ta natural lage.

示例: Yes, I prefer to make a list when I go shopping because my memory is not very good. Therefore, if I go without a list, I sometimes forget important items. Making a list helps me remember everything I need.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar sentence gulo onek boro. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke chhoto korte, ar linking word use kore answer ke aro clear r logical banate.

示例: Yes, I make lists for my work, especially for my study subjects. I prioritize tasks in my list, which helps me stay organized. It really works for me because, as I said, my memory is not very strong.

建议: Apnar opinion clear, kintu kichu grammar error ache. Apni chesta korun more polite expression use korte, ar sentence gulo ke chhoto r shothik korte.

示例: Well, it depends on people's perspectives. However, I think some people avoid making lists because they feel lazy. But I believe making lists can help them become more disciplined and effective.

建议: Apnar answer bhalo, kintu kichu grammar mistake ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke aro shothik r natural korte, ar linking word use korte.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone, mainly using the notes app. Since I use an Android phone, its note features are very good. It is very convenient for me to make notes whenever I have free time.

× Yes, I prefer to make list when I go for shopping because my memorizing skill is not so well at all.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list when I go shopping because my memorizing skills are not very good at all.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular, so it requires the article 'a'. 'Memorizing skill' should be plural 'memorizing skills' to refer to the ability in general. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. 'Not so well' is an adverb phrase, but here an adjective phrase 'not very good' is more appropriate to describe 'skills'. In English (Bangladesh), we say 'a list' for one list and 'skills' in plural when talking about abilities.

× So when I go to a shop without making any list then sometimes I forget any necessary item that I should buy.

✓ So when I go to a shop without making any list, sometimes I forget some necessary items that I should buy.

'Any list' is incorrect; it should be 'any lists' or better 'a list' since 'list' is countable. 'Any necessary item' is better as 'some necessary items' because multiple items are usually forgotten. Also, the sentence needs a comma before 'sometimes' for clarity. In English (Bangladesh), we use 'a list' for singular and 'some items' for plural countable nouns.

× Yes, I make list for my work and it mainly depends on the priorities of work as I am student and I mainly make list for my study subject and I think it's really work for me.

✓ Yes, I make lists for my work and it mainly depends on the priorities of work as I am a student and I mainly make lists for my study subjects and I think it really works for me.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' because 'list' is countable and plural is appropriate here. 'I am student' needs the article 'a' before 'student'. 'Study subject' should be plural 'study subjects' as students usually have multiple subjects. 'It's really work' should be 'it really works' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. In English (Bangladesh), we use 'a student' and plural forms for multiple subjects or lists.

× As I mentioned earlier I my memories is not so well.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, my memory is not very good.

'I my memories' is incorrect; it should be 'my memory'. 'Memories' refers to recollections, but here the speaker means the ability to remember, which is 'memory'. 'Is not so well' is incorrect; 'memory is not very good' is correct. In English (Bangladesh), 'memory' is singular when referring to the ability to remember.

× Well, it depends on the perspective of different people.

✓ Well, it depends on the perspectives of different people.

'Perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' because different people have different viewpoints. The preposition 'on' is correct here. In English (Bangladesh), we use plural 'perspectives' when referring to multiple people's views.

× But I think some people are lazy and for their laziness they don't make list.

✓ But I think some people are lazy and because of their laziness, they don't make lists.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' because 'list' is countable and plural is appropriate here. Also, 'for their laziness' is better expressed as 'because of their laziness'. In English (Bangladesh), we say 'make lists' when referring to the action generally.

× But I think they should practice of making list because it's gonna help them to be disciplined and effective.

✓ But I think they should practice making lists because it will help them to be disciplined and effective.

'Practice of making list' is incorrect; the correct form is 'practice making lists'. 'Gonna' is informal; 'will' is more appropriate in formal speech. 'List' should be plural 'lists' as it refers to the general action. In English (Bangladesh), 'practice making lists' is the correct phrase.

× I like to make a list on my phone.

✓ I like to make lists on my phone.

Since the speaker refers to the general habit of making lists, the plural 'lists' is more appropriate than 'a list'. In English (Bangladesh), plural is used when talking about habitual actions.

× It's mainly the note of my phone because I am a Android user and the note features of Android phone is so well.

✓ It's mainly the notes app on my phone because I am an Android user and the note features of Android phones are very good.

'The note of my phone' is better expressed as 'the notes app on my phone'. 'A Android user' should be 'an Android user' because 'Android' starts with a vowel sound. 'Note features' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'So well' is incorrect; 'very good' is appropriate. In English (Bangladesh), we use 'an' before vowel sounds and plural verbs with plural subjects.

× So it's very convenient for me to make note on my phone and whenever I get free time I make my note.

✓ So it's very convenient for me to take notes on my phone and whenever I get free time, I make my notes.

'Make note' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take notes'. 'Make my note' should be 'make my notes' to indicate multiple notes. A comma is needed after 'free time' for clarity. In English (Bangladesh), 'take notes' is the common phrase for writing notes.