列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达方式。

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me buy only what I need and avoid wasting money.

建议: 回答中有很多语气词和不完整的句子，建议练习流利表达，使用完整句子并清晰说明理由。

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks and complete my homework on time.

建议: 回答缺少连贯性和语法正确性，建议使用连接词并改正语法错误，使表达更流畅。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time and is too troublesome.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，建议使用正确的时态和句型，并简洁表达偏好。

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because I am used to writing with a pencil, and it feels more natural to me.

× Because making list a waste of time and very troublesome.

✓ Because making lists is a waste of time and very troublesome.

这里'making list'中，'list'应为复数形式'lists'，因为泛指多次制作清单的行为；同时缺少系动词'is'，完整表达应为'making lists is a waste of time'。动名词短语后需要有谓语动词。

× Because making list a waste of time and very troublesome.

✓ Because making lists is a waste of time and very troublesome.

'list'应使用复数形式'lists'，因为这里指的是制作清单的行为的普遍情况，而非单一清单。

× Because making list a waste of time and very troublesome.

✓ Because making lists is a waste of time and very troublesome.

句子缺少谓语动词，导致结构不完整，应补充系动词'is'使句子完整。

× I really love make a list on paper.

✓ I really love making a list on paper.

动词'love'后应接动名词形式，故'make'应改为'making'。

× Because making list a waste of time and very troublesome.

✓ Because making lists is a waste of time and very troublesome.

'list'应为复数形式'lists'，因为这里指的是制作清单的行为的普遍情况。

× I can always uh, one by 1:00 to make a homework, and as far as I'm concerned, it is very useful.

✓ I can always, uh, do my homework one by one, and as far as I'm concerned, it is very useful.

'make a homework'不符合英语习惯，'homework'是不可数名词，应使用'do homework'；'one by 1:00'表达不清，应改为'one by one'表示逐个完成。