列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문장이 중간에 끊겨서 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 완성하고 중복된 표현을 피하며, 구체적인 이유를 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me plan what to buy and save money by avoiding unnecessary purchases.

建议: 문법적으로 'prioritize' 동사 형태가 맞지 않고, 문장이 다소 단순합니다. 문법을 정확히 사용하고, 연결어를 활용해 문장을 자연스럽게 이어가며 구체적인 예시를 추가해 보세요.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because, as a busy undergraduate student, prioritizing important tasks helps me manage my time effectively.

建议: 답변이 미완성되고 문장이 끊겨서 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 완전한 문장으로 답변을 마무리하고, 구체적인 이유나 예시를 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 하세요.

示例: I think it depends on personality. People who are organized and like planning usually enjoy making lists, but others may find it unnecessary or time-consuming.

建议: 문장이 불완전하고 끝이 끊겨서 의미가 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 완성하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하며 연결어를 사용해 자연스럽게 답변하세요.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because the alarm app automatically sets reminders, which helps me stay organized and not forget important tasks.

× Yes, I always make a list prior to shopping, making a list and. Planning what to buy can help me to save money.

✓ Yes, I always make a list prior to shopping. Making a list and planning what to buy can help me save money.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains an incomplete phrase 'making a list and.' which disrupts the sentence flow. Correcting it into two complete sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Making a list and prioritize the important work helps.

✓ Making a list and prioritizing the important work helps.

The verb following 'and' should be in the -ing form to match 'making'. Using 'prioritize' (base form) is incorrect here. Both verbs should be gerunds to function as subjects of the sentence.

× If you're more sophisticated or you're a planner, you would like making lists. But if you're not like that. You.

✓ If you're more organized or you're a planner, you would like making lists. But if you're not like that, you might not.

The original sentences are incomplete and fragmented. 'You.' is a sentence fragment. Also, 'sophisticated' is not the appropriate adjective here; 'organized' fits better. Completing the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because when I make list, my alarm app automatically sets an alarm. To.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because when I make a list, my alarm app automatically sets an alarm.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'To.' which is incomplete and incorrect. Also, 'make list' is missing the article 'a'. Removing the fragment and adding the article corrects the sentence.