列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear and natural, but you can improve coherence by using linking words and correcting minor grammar errors. For example, say "I don't have to make a list because I have a good memory" and "I enjoy seeing random products that are promoted and discounted." Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly.

示例: No, I don't have to make a list because I have a good memory and usually remember what I need. Moreover, I enjoy discovering random products that are promoted and discounted while shopping.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and lacks linking words. For example, say "I use a digital app that reminds me about my tasks." Also, connect your ideas with linking words like "because" or "so" to improve flow.

示例: Yes, I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me focus on what I need to do. I use a digital app that reminds me about my tasks, so I don't forget anything important.

建议: Your answer has good content but contains grammar mistakes and could be more coherent. For example, say "people are overwhelmed by lists" and use linking words like "because" or "and". Also, avoid repeating the word "list" unnecessarily.

示例: One reason why some people don't like making lists is because they feel overwhelmed by them. Seeing a long list can make people stressed, and they may feel bad if they can't finish all the tasks.

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by using more precise linking words and correcting minor phrasing. For example, say "I prefer using my phone because I can check my tasks anytime, and I can easily modify them using the app."

示例: I prefer using my phone because I can check my tasks anytime, and I can easily modify them using the app.

× Plus I enjoy seeing random product which are promoted and discounted.

✓ Plus I enjoy seeing random products which are promoted and discounted.

The word 'product' should be plural 'products' because it refers to multiple items. Using the plural form correctly matches the context of seeing various products promoted and discounted.

× I use digital app does remind me about my task.

✓ I use a digital app that reminds me about my tasks.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and missing articles. 'Digital app' needs the article 'a' and the relative clause should be 'that reminds me' to correctly connect the app with its function. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context.

× One of the reasons that people don't make a list is they overwhelmed by list.

✓ One of the reasons that people don't make a list is that they are overwhelmed by the list.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' to form the correct passive voice 'are overwhelmed'. Also, 'by list' should be 'by the list' to specify the object. Adding 'that' after 'is' improves clarity.

× Seeing a long list can make some people feel stressed, plus they feel bad if they can't finish all the tasks.

✓ Seeing a long list can make some people feel stressed, and they feel bad if they can't finish all the tasks.

Using 'plus' to connect two independent clauses is informal and can be replaced with 'and' for better sentence structure and clarity.

× I prefer using my phone because I can see my tasks every single time.

✓ I prefer using my phone because I can see my tasks all the time.

The phrase 'every single time' is awkward in this context. 'All the time' is a more natural and correct expression to indicate frequent or constant visibility of tasks.

× Plus I can change tasks easily if I use this app.

✓ Plus I can change tasks easily if I use that app.

Since the app was mentioned earlier, 'that app' is more appropriate to refer back to it rather than 'this app', which usually refers to something closer or currently held.