列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'invented thing'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, 'I am not good at remembering things, so I make a list whenever I go shopping. This helps me save money because I avoid buying unnecessary items.'

示例: I am not good at remembering things, so I make a list whenever I go shopping. This helps me save money because I avoid buying unnecessary items that I don't really need.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing like 'Back to be honest' and 'do list'. Use correct expressions and linking words to improve coherence. For example, say, 'To be honest, I am a student and don't have much work, but when I have special tasks, I make a list. It helps me remember things and organise my time better.'

示例: To be honest, I am a student and don't have much work, but when I have special tasks, I make a list. It helps me remember things and organise my time better.

建议: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear sentences. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words like 'because' and 'although' properly. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they are good at memorising things. Although others are not good at writing, so they prefer to keep things in mind rather than writing them down.'

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they are good at memorising things. Although others are not good at writing, so they prefer to keep things in mind rather than writing them down.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and use linking words to explain your preference. For example, 'Nowadays, technology makes life easier. I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can send messages to my parents, which helps me remember what to buy and avoid over-purchasing.'

示例: Nowadays, technology makes life easier. I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can send messages to my parents, which helps me remember what to buy and avoid over-purchasing.

× I'm not good at reminding thing so I make a list whenever I visit a shop for buying things.

✓ I'm not good at remembering things so I make a list whenever I visit a shop to buy things.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'reminding' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'remembering'. The phrase 'for buying things' is better expressed as 'to buy things' for clarity.

× It's helped me to save money because I often buy invented thing but when I go with the list it helps me to avoid these things.

✓ It has helped me to save money because I often buy unnecessary things, but when I go with the list, it helps me to avoid these things.

'Invented thing' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'unnecessary things' or 'things I don't need'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context. 'It's helped' should be 'It has helped' for proper tense.

× Back to be honest, I'm a student so I do not have much work to do but whenever I have to do something special and work at that time I do list.

✓ To be honest, I'm a student so I do not have much work to do, but whenever I have to do something special and work at that time, I make a list.

The phrase 'Back to be honest' is incorrect; it should be 'To be honest'. Also, 'I do list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I make a list'. Commas are added for clarity.

× It's helped me to remind thing as well as organize my time.

✓ It has helped me to remember things as well as organize my time.

'Remind thing' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'remember things'. Also, 'It's helped' should be 'It has helped' for proper tense.

× What some people don't like to make lists because they at good at memorize things so they prefer to memorize instead of writing.

✓ Some people don't like to make lists because they are good at memorizing things, so they prefer to memorize instead of writing.

The phrase 'What some people' is incorrect and unnecessary. 'They at good at memorize' should be 'they are good at memorizing'. The verb 'memorize' should be in the '-ing' form after 'good at'.

× Although some people are not good at writing so they likes to keep it in mind instead of writing on a paper.

✓ Although some people are not good at writing, so they like to keep it in mind instead of writing on paper.

'They likes' is incorrect; it should be 'they like' to agree with the plural subject. Also, 'on a paper' should be 'on paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here.

× Nowadays technology provide us peace.

✓ Nowadays, technology provides us peace.

'Technology' is singular and requires the singular verb 'provides'. Also, a comma after 'Nowadays' improves readability.

× Work with technology is very easy.

✓ Working with technology is very easy.

The phrase 'Work with technology' is incorrect as a subject; it should be 'Working with technology' to function as a gerund phrase.

× Whenever I visit a shop, I send text message to my father and mother which helped me to memorize thing and I do not over purchase by this.

✓ Whenever I visit a shop, I send text messages to my father and mother which help me to remember things and I do not overpurchase because of this.

'Send text message' should be plural 'send text messages' to match the context. 'Helped' should be present tense 'help' to agree with 'send'. 'Memorize thing' should be 'remember things'. 'Over purchase' should be one word 'overpurchase'. 'By this' is better expressed as 'because of this'.