列表— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
How do I really make a list when I shop because I don't really buy groceries.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
I didn't make a list for my work but it usually lasts for three days and I just completely forget about it or it just gives me laziness to do it.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
I think that the person is not really motivated into making the list or moving and planning as the list says.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I prefer to make a list on paper because I feel that paper is more convenient to write and look rather than unlocking the phone and looking at the list every time and opening the app.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 50.0建议: 質問に対して直接的な答えがなく、内容が不明瞭です。質問に対して明確に「はい」か「いいえ」で答え、その理由や状況を具体的に説明しましょう。
示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I only buy a few items and remember them easily.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 55.0建议: 答えが少し混乱しており、文法的にも改善が必要です。質問に対して明確に答え、理由や結果を具体的に述べ、論理的に繋げる表現を使いましょう。
示例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work. As a result, tasks often take three days to complete because I tend to forget them or feel unmotivated.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 65.0建议: 答えは理解できますが、より自然で流暢な表現を使い、理由を具体的に説明しましょう。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いです。
示例: Some people don't like making lists because they lack motivation to plan their tasks, and they may find it difficult to follow the list strictly.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 75.0建议: 答えは明確で理由も述べられていますが、文が少し長く冗長です。簡潔にし、接続詞を適切に使って流れを良くしましょう。
示例: I prefer making lists on paper because it's more convenient to write and check than unlocking my phone and opening an app every time.
语法
× How do I really make a list when I shop because I don't really buy groceries.
✓ I don't really make a list when I shop because I don't really buy groceries.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'do I really make' which is a question form, but the sentence is a statement. The correct form is 'I don't really make a list'. This is a modal verb usage issue because 'do' is used incorrectly here.
× I didn't make a list for my work but it usually lasts for three days and I just completely forget about it or it just gives me laziness to do it.
✓ I don't make a list for my work but it usually lasts for three days and I just completely forget about it or it just makes me feel lazy to do it.
The sentence mixes past tense 'didn't make' with present tense 'usually lasts' and 'forget'. To maintain consistency, present tense 'don't make' should be used. Also, 'gives me laziness' is incorrect; 'makes me feel lazy' is the correct expression.
× I think that the person is not really motivated into making the list or moving and planning as the list says.
✓ I think that the person is not really motivated to make the list or to move and plan as the list says.
The phrase 'motivated into making' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'motivated to make'. Also, parallel structure requires 'to move and plan' instead of 'moving and planning' here.
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