列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够连贯，表达不自然，且有语法错误。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体理由支持，避免重复和断句不当。

示例: No, I don't usually make a shopping list because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. If I see something special, I like to buy it immediately.

建议: 回答基本符合要求，但语法和表达有误，句子结构不够自然。建议使用更准确的语法和连接词，使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I usually make a list for my experiments, and I find it very useful. The list helps me plan the next steps clearly, which is one reason why my experiments succeed.

建议: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体原因支持，避免使用错误词汇和不完整句子。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome. They prefer to study spontaneously without strict plans.

建议: 回答内容较好，但表达不够自然，句子结构重复。建议使用更连贯的句子，并注意单复数和介词的正确使用。

示例: It depends on the situation. When I'm doing experiments or attending events, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient. However, when studying for exams, I like to write lists on paper.

× No, I don't make a list of one shop but it makes me troubled and I just want to go shopping.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I shop, but it troubles me and I just want to go shopping.

这里的“a list of one shop”表达不清，应该用“a list when I shop”表示购物时是否列清单。并且“makes me troubled”用法不正确，应该用“troubles me”表示“让我感到困扰”。

× If I saw something special I want to buy it.

✓ If I see something special, I want to buy it.

条件句中使用一般现在时表示习惯或事实，不能用过去式“saw”，应改为“see”。

× Yes Sir, I usually make a list for my experiment, but I found it useful.

✓ Yes Sir, I usually make a list for my experiments, and I find it useful.

“experiment”应使用复数形式“experiments”，因为通常指多次实验。同时时态应保持一致，使用一般现在时“find”表示习惯。

× This list guides me how to carry out my experiment next.

✓ This list guides me on how to carry out my experiment next.

动词“guide”后应接介词“on”引导宾语从句，缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× It is a one of the reason why my experiment succeed finally.

✓ It is one of the reasons why my experiment succeeds finally.

“a one of the reason”应改为“one of the reasons”，表示多个原因中的一个；“experiment”单数正确，但动词“succeed”应加第三人称单数形式“succeeds”。

× Making lesson maybe makes them feel a bit troublesome.

✓ Making lists maybe makes them feel a bit troubled.

“lesson”应改为复数“lists”，且“troublesome”形容词用来形容事物，描述人的感受应使用“troubled”。

× They prefer to work on studies spontaneously. This list.

✓ They prefer to study spontaneously without making a list.

“This list.”是不完整句子，应合并或删除，使句子完整通顺。

× When I'm carrying out my experiment or attending or event, I just like to make a list on my phone.

✓ When I'm carrying out my experiment or attending an event, I like to make a list on my phone.

“attending or event”应为“attending an event”，冠词使用错误且“or”多余。

× But I found it is very comfortable.

✓ But I find it very convenient.

“found”时态不对，应为一般现在时“find”；“comfortable”通常形容人，描述事物更合适用“convenient”。

× If I'm studying for my examination, I just like to make a list on papers.

✓ If I'm studying for my examinations, I like to make a list on paper.

“examination”应使用复数“examinations”表示多次考试；“on papers”应为“on paper”，表示用纸写。